千卉 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

請問我這篇英文有沒有不對或是要改的地方(求英文高手)

I don't mind spending some time

just hanging here with you

cuz I don't find too many guys

that treat me like you do

those other guys all wanna take me for a ride

but when I walk their talk is suicideI could be your confidante

just one of your girlfriends

but I know that love's what you want

why shouldn't we be with the one we really love?

now tell me who have you been dreaming ofexcuse me for feeling

this moment is critical

might be we feeling I'm not afraid to show it, understand?

Yeah,I'm hot,bitch

don't be mad at me go check your mandon't care who's watching me

I do just what I want

damn I like that

I need a drinktake a cold shower when you get home sorryand you've been on my mind cause baby you're just so damn fine

What do you say what will it take?

to make you see that I'm not playin

請幫我看一下有沒有改的 或是寫錯的

順便幫我附上中文 謝謝 不要用翻譯機哦

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  • 10 年前
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    I don't mind spending some time

    just hanging here with you

    cuz I don't find too many guys

    that treat me like you do

    those other guys all wanna take me for a ride

    but when I walk their talk is suicideI could be your confidante

    just one of your girlfriends

    but I know that love's what you want

    why shouldn't we be with the one we really love?

    now tell me who have you been dreaming ofexcuse me for feeling

    this moment is critical

    might be we feeling I'm not afraid to show it, understand?

    Yeah,I'm hot,bitch

    don't be mad at me go check your mandon't care who's watching me

    I do just what I want

    damn I like that

    I need a drinktake a cold shower when you get home sorryand you've been on my mind cause baby you're just so damn fine

    What do you say what will it take?

    to make you see that I'm not playin

    This is a really good passage.

    But I'm not sure if you're using this as for like a song cause if you are then it's perfectly fine.

    But if it's a letter for someone then the words that I've highlighted you might want to correct it.

    I would strongly encourage you to try not using the word

    bitch .

    You can think it over for a bit. Just a little advise.

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