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一題英文改錯20點

Jack and tom are in the bookstore.They are read a book about

blind and deaf people.They learned a bout Helen Keller.She get

sick when she was young.She lost both her eyesight and

hearing.A teacher last help Helen.She touched Helen's hand

and teacher Helen words.The teacher us changng she life.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    1. Jack and Tom are in the bookstore.

    人名第一個字母要有寫.

    2. They are reading a book about blind and deaf people.

    句子用現在進行式,因為他們倆正在書店裡閱讀.

    3. They learn about Helen Keller.

    整個敘述的時態要一致,由於前面的句子都是現在式,這句也要改成現在式.

    3. She got sick when she was young.

    時態要一致,Helen Keller年輕時生病是過去所發生的事.

    4. She lost both her eyesight and hearing.

    這句沒錯. eyesight是視力,hearing是聽力.

    5. A teacher last helped Helen.

    last當副詞修飾後面的動詞help. 而help記得要改成過去式,因為是過去發生的事.

    6. She touched Helen's hand and taught Helen words.

    教的動詞是"teach",不是"teacher". 記得也要改成過去式.

    7. The teacher has changed her life.

    此句要用現在完成式. 而life前要用所有格"her".

    2010-12-24 10:48:46 補充:

    第一題我寫錯字了->人名第一個字母要"大"寫.

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    Jack and Tom are in the bookstore.

    They are reading a book about blind and deaf people.

    They learnd about Helen Keller.

    She got sick when she was young.

    She lost both her eyesight and hearing.

    A teacher last helped Helen.

    She touched Helen's hand and taught Helen words.

    The teacher has changed her life.

    參考資料: 自己
  • 1 0 年前

    Jack and Tom are in the bookstore.They are reading a book about

    blind and deaf people.They learn about Helen Keller.She got

    sick when she was young.She lost both her eyesight and

    listening.A teacher finally help Helen.She touched Helen's hand

    and teach Helen words.The teacher has changed she life.

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  • 1 0 年前

    1.Jack and tom are in the bookstore.They are read a book about

    ((人名一律大寫))

    2.blind and deaf people.They learned a bout Helen Keller.She get

    ((在這裡要用{現在簡單式})) ((所以要去掉ed))

    3.blind and deaf people.

    They learned a bout Helen Keller.She get

    ((過去分詞所以要用got))

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  • 1 0 年前

    Jack and Tom are in the book store, and they are reading a book about the blind and the deaf people. They read about the story of Helen Keller who was sick when she was young, so she lost both her eye sight and hearing. Luckily, a teacher came to help her. The teacher held her hand and taught Helen words. Finally, Helen's life was changed by the teacher.

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