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您好～

我在10/12/2010收到了你們寄給我的For Lost or Damaged Parcels表格.隔天我填寫好後附上PDF檔案回傳給你們.之後即收到回信說明會在7-10天內完成退款的手續.但截至目前為止.我一直沒有收到任何退款的訊息.11月我又詢問了一次.也是一樣沒有沒有任何結果.現在已經是12月了.請跟我確認我的賠償申請程序目前的進度.退款的方式是信用卡退款還是支票退款？非常感謝！

(謝絕翻譯軟體！)

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Dear Paige～

你可以給我你的email嗎？非常感謝！！

Answer 1

最佳解答

To whom it may concern,

I recieved the form for Lost or Damaged Parcels from you on Oct. 12, 2010. The next day, I filled out the form and sent it back to you with a PDF file. Then I recieved a mail saying the refund will be processed in 7-10 days. But I have not recieved any more information about the refund.

I asked about the refund sometimes in Nov. again, but I did not get any answer either at that time. It is now Dec. Please contact me about the progress of my refund. How will I get my refund back? Will it be credited back to my card or paid by check? Thanks very much for your help.

Answer 2

J...我熱心助人的朋友, you deserve my points for effort

besides what HMC mentioned,

"To Whom It May Concern"

"receive" - remember this rule; "I" comes before "E" except after "C"

the refund "would" be processed....

Overall, nice work ^ - ^

2010-12-24 20:37:55 補充：

There are also minor mistakes I don't care to point out

Answer 3

The translation was pretty good .. The only improvement needed is ---

I asked about the refund sometimes in Nov. again,

I asked about the refund some time in November again,

It is not appropriate to use abbreviation in this circumstance.

Answer 4

我記得這篇文章，因為我有幫忙翻譯。

很抱歉聽到你還沒拿到退款。你要不要試試打電話看看？email通常效用不是很大耶！

如果你不介意，可以寫信給我，把訂款單號，服務部門電話給我，我可以試著幫你討回公道！　最討厭服務不好的公司了！！