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英文履歷修改

可以幫我檢查一下句子的順暢度並修改嗎

是要面試用的英文履歷(會計助理)

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My name is Gill Chao, I was born in Kaohsiung , on August 29th, 1989. I have one sibling. Take the education attitude of freedom democracy from little parents, enable us to develop one's own interest carefree, for family live hood of sharing, I choose the part study, enter a private company and serve as the accounting assistant, with this working opportunity, combine with the practice oneself in the knowledge that the school studies usually, train to the sense of duty and careful attitude too, I have a good heart that studies, will continue promoting one's own English ability and professional knowledge too in the future, I am a mature person and I am confident that I can pursue my goals. In order to achieve them, I accept all challenges and never give up. With my strong determination, I can fulfill my goals in the near future. will hope to learn to grow up with everybody in the good working environment of your company.

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可以問一下,修改後的整篇中文嗎?

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is Gill Chao. I was born in Kaohsiung , on August 29th, 1989. Ihave only one brother (sister). (sibling 兄弟姊妹才用) I have inherited free and democratic attitude toward education from my parents. My parents’ teachings enable us to develop our interest freely. And we have carefree and happy family life. We share happiness and misery together. When I grew up, I chose to enter a private company and served as an assistant accountant. I learned much from this working opportunity. I have combined my knowledge from self-study and the experience got from job. I am sure I am ready to be equal to a new job in accounting. My parents have taught me well that I should have a correct learning attitude and have an open mind. Through their teaching, I have developed sound personality. In order to help my family finance, I chose to work while studying in school. I worked for a private company as an assistant accountant. I got much working experience and knowledge that I did not acquire from school. I have trained myself to achieve a good sense of duty and good work ethics.

    I have a good heart. But I need to strengthen my English ability and professional knowledge in the future. I am a mature person and I am confident that I can pursue my goals. In order to achieve them, I dare to accept all challenges and will never give up my effort. With my strong determination, I can fulfill my goals in the near future. I hope to learn to grow up with everybody in the good working environment of your company.

    I have willing to learn. And I will continue to improve my English skills and professional knowledge. I am a mature person and confident in pursuing my goals. I look forward to having the opportunity to learn and grow with the good people of your fine company.

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