炭水 竹 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

英文高手!請幫我檢查我的講稿翻譯對不對

這是我們演出話劇之前我要先開場的話,想請英文高手幫我看看句子是不是順文法是不是對,麻煩了,謝謝:)

Today we like to introduce the story “A Happy Family”.

今天我們要演出的是A HAPPY FAMILY。

The story divides into two sections. 故事共分為兩段。

The first section is about a girl want to sell out the milk then she could buy herself new clothes.

第一段是講一個女孩她想把牛奶賣掉然後她就可以為自己買新衣服了。

The second section is about three boys they always fight. Their father often persuades them with sincere words and earnest wishes, but he tries in vain. The father thinks he should use practical case to educate them.

第二段是講三個男孩他們經常打架,他們的爸爸經常苦口婆心的勸說仍然無濟於事。於是爸爸認為應該用事實來教導他們。

Now, let’s start the show and see what going on.現在,讓我們開始演出並看看故事會如何進行下去。

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先謝謝編號001的回答者^ ^

不過我需要的是有英文能力的人來幫我檢查,

因為我在寫的時候就已經有參考過GOOGLE翻譯,

所以才需要有人來幫我糾正錯誤,

不過還是很謝謝你的幫忙:)

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    Today we like to introduce the story “A Happy Family”.

    今天我們要演出的是A HAPPY FAMILY。

    Our performance today is about the story of "A Happy Family"

    The story divides into two sections. 故事共分為兩段。

    The story is divided into two sections

    The first section is about a girl want to sell out the milk then she could buy herself new clothes.(sell out 是出賣的意思,在此不合)

    The first sedtion is about this girl who wants to sell all of her milk so she could buy new clothes.

    第一段是講一個女孩她想把牛奶賣掉然後她就可以為自己買新衣服了。

    The second section is about three boys they always fight. Their father often persuades them with sincere words and earnest wishes, but he tries in vain. The father thinks he should use practical case to educate them.

    第二段是講三個男孩他們經常打架,他們的爸爸經常苦口婆心的勸說仍然無濟於事。於是爸爸認為應該用事實來教導他們。

    The second section is about three boys that always fight. Their father tries to persuade them with sincere words and earnest wishes with no success. He realizes that he should use life experience as a tool to educate them .

    Now, let’s start the show and see what going on.現在,讓我們開始演出並看看故事會如何進行下去。

    Now, let's start the shoe and see how things turn out.

    希望有幫助

    參考資料: jim
  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    到下面的網址看看吧

    ▶▶http://qoozoo09260.pixnet.net/blog

  • 10 年前

    但是 我查Google的翻譯就不是這樣耶

    今天我們要演出的是A HAPPY FAMILY。

    故事共分為兩段。

    第一段是講一個女孩她想把牛奶賣掉然後她就可以為自己買新衣服了。

    第二段是講三個男孩他們經常打架,

    他們的爸爸經常苦口婆心的勸說仍然無濟於事。於是爸爸認為應該用事

    實來教導他們。

    現在,讓我們開始演出並看看故事會如何進行下去。

    Today, we have to show that A HAPPY FAMILY.

    Story is divided into two sections.

    The first was to tell a girl she wanted to sell the milk and then she

    thought he could buy new clothes.

    The second paragraph is about three boys, they often fight, and their father often earnestly to persuade still to no avail. So Dad think we should teach them with the facts.

    Now, let's start to show and see how the story will continue. 聆聽以拼音方式閱讀 字典 - 檢視詳細字典

    參考資料: Google 翻譯
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