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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

麻煩英文高手 幫我找出文法問題 急!!!!!!(20點)

Why do shopping online become so popular? Because of computers owners increased very fast. Internet using rate become more and more common. I have a few reason for the causes of shopping online.

Shopping online is very convenient, because you can buy anything on the internet. For exmple, you can buy clothes, shoes, food, cds, tickets and so on. First, shoppers don't have to go outside. The shopper just stay at home and clicking their mouses and they can buy what they want. If the weather outside is raining or cold, this is a good way of shopping. Second, goods have 7-day trial period. If goods was bad or broke, you can return to the seller and you don't have to pay anythin. Third, no downpayment, no interest in in stallment. Shoppers don't need to pay extra fee, they only pay for the price of goods. Forth, the price of goods is cheaper. Shoppers can make a price comparison and they can buy goods for lower price. Fifth, open for all day long. Shoppers don't have to worry about the time, they can buy goods in anytime. Sixth, different types of payment. Shoppers can pay buy installments, credit card and cash. FInally, shopping online can help shoppers easy to find goods that they wants to buy.

In conclusion, all of reasons above is why shopping online become so popular. This phenomenon will keep going for a long time.

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  • 9 年前
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    Why does shopping online become so popular? Because of computers owners increase very fast. Internet use has become extremely common. I argue a few reasons for shopping online:

    Shopping online is very convenient, because you can buy almost anything on-line. For example, you can buy clothes, shoes, food, C-D's, tickets and so on. First, costumers don't have to go outside. They can just stay at home and click their mouses and buy what they want. This is even more convenient If the weather is rainy or cold. Second, online shops offer 7-day trial period. If goods are bad or broke, you can return them with out any cost. Third, no down-payment, no interest in installment. Costumers don't need to pay extra fee; they only pay for the price of goods. Forth, things online are normally cheaper. Consumers are able to compare the prices easily and quickly for a fair price. Fifth, these online shops are open all-day-long. Consumers don't have to worry about time; they can buy at anytime. Sixth, there are various ways that you can pay your purchases. Costumers can pay by installments, credit card or cash. And last, shopping online can help people to find things that they wants to buy efficiently.

    In conclusion, online shops have made shopping so efficient. And because of this, online shopping will continue to grow.

    2011-01-11 07:21:23 補充:

    broke 改成 broken

    第三點重改:

    "Third, there are no down-payments, nor interests for things bought."

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