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I recalled one instance when I had a fight with one of my best friends, Miki, in my junior year. We attended in the same tennis course on that semester and she was my partner. I felt angry because I thought that she didn’t care about my feeling. The test was extremely important for our grades since it was a final test on the end of school day. The teacher asked us to throw the balls to our partners, so I waited until the wind stop then throw the ball to her. However, She didn’t do exact thing as I did when she throw the balls to me. One can well imagine that I got a bad grade and she got the higher grade in the end. I walked to her and start to complain about her behavior and how it made me feel awful. It was our first fight and we experienced a long silence for almost 10 minutes. After realizing that my anger was mainly due to my concern with my grade I started to break the ice between us. I told her my concern and asked her inner feeling. We talked about the event aboveboard and gave each other sincere opinion. Fortunately, both of us didn’t afraid of conflict. On the contrary, we took this experience as a precious opportunity to know each other. What surprised me a lots is our friendship became even firm than before.

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    (I like the story. Here're my corrections.)

    I recalled an instance of conflicts when I had a fight with one of my best friends, Miki, in my junior year. We took the same tennis course during that semester and she was my partner. I felt angry because I thought that she didn’t care about my feelings. One test was extremely important for our grades since it was the final exam. We were supposed to take turns to feed balls for our partner to hit. When it was my turn to feed balls, I always waited until the wind stopped to throw the ball to Miki, so that she could hit more easily. However, when it was her turn to feed balls, she did not care about the wind at all, so I was unable to hit the ball well. One can imagine that eventually I got a poor grade while she got a higher one in the end.

    Later, I walked to her to complain about her behavior and how it made me feel awful. It was our first fight. Right after my complaint, there was a silence for about ten long minutes. When I calmed down, I thought about the matter and decided to break the ice between us. I told her my concern and asked how she was feeling. We talked about the incident openly and gave each other sincere opinion. Fortunately, neither of us was afraid of conflicts. On the contrary, we took this experience as a precious opportunity to know each other better. What surprises me greatly is that our friendship has become even firmer than before since that unforgettable fight.

    2011-01-16 14:43:21 補充:

    更正第一段最後一句:

    One can imagine that eventually I got a poor grade while she got a higher one.

    (刪除 "in the end")

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