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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

請各位英文高手幫我改作文>< 感謝~

這是第一次寫英文作文 哪裡寫不好直接講沒有關係 我知道有沒有文法錯誤的地方或是哪裡不順 應該怎麼寫..感謝!

My family went to Taitung to celebrated the Chinese New Year, we went there by train and stay at Hualian for one night. There were many children on the railway carriage with us on our way to Hualian, Mom said that they gather all the children under 18 to this carriage, but it was still fun for me even there was a little brawl. When we reached Hualian train station, Dad’s friend came to pick us up. He was very excited to see us. The next day, we went to Taitung by train, too. As soon as we got grandma and grandpa’s house, Guard, the dog grandpa feed, welcomed us with its tail swinging. Taitung is a very beautiful place, there’s no air pollution, no tall buildings. Only trees, birds, and blue sky. We can hear bird singing here and there everyday. Grandpa’s house is at the foot of the hill, and a brook in front of the house. And it rains every afternoon makes the mountain more green and more pleasing. The weather there was always nice. I helped grandma made Chinese New Year Cake and Radish Cake and more. At Chinese New Year Eve, Dad put some wood on a wheelbarrow and lighted a fire on it. He said nothing when I asked him what he is doing. But later we all know what’s that, it’s a “fire car”, to warm ourselves by it. That is really interesting and “creative”! We had a great time this winner vacation.

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改文法or用字 不是翻譯=ˇ= 但還是謝謝你:)

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  • 9 年前
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    Dear匿名版大您好@ @ 就讓本Panda來幫妳ㄅ; 如下:

    (紅字為修改部份, 紅框為不必要的部份, 黑框為解釋)

    My family and I went to Taitung to celebrate (to的後面不可用過去式)the Chinese New Year. We went there by train and stayed at Hualian for one night. On our way to Hualian, there were many children on the same carriage as us. Mom told me they gathered all the children (under 18) to this carriage, and it was (still) fun for me to see them brawl. When we reached the Hualian Train Station, Dad’s friend came to pick us up; he was very excited to see us. The next day, we continued the train ride to Taitung (by train, too). As soon as we got to grandma and grandpa’s house, Guard, their dog, greeted us with a wagging tail (swinging). Taitung is a very beautiful place; there is (作業及正式文件不可有縮寫)no air pollution, no tall buildings, only trees, birds, and blue sky. We could hear birds singing (here and there) every day. Grandpa’s house is at the foot of the hill, with a brook in front of it. The daily afternoon rain makes the mountain greener and more pleasing, and the weather (there) is always nice. I helped grandma make(這裡的make是延續前面的helped, 所以不可用過去式) the Chinese New Year Cake, (and) Radish Cake, and more. On the Chinese New Year Eve, Dad put some wood on a wheelbarrow and lighted a fire (on it). He remained silent when I asked him what he was doing, but later we all learned it was a “fire car”, used to warm ourselves (by it). We all thought it was really interesting and “creative”! We had a great time during this winter vacation. 整合如下: 希望有幫到您 靈活學英文

    2011-02-16 10:06:13 補充:

    My family and I went to Taitung to celebrate the Chinese New Year. We went there by train and stayed at Hualian for one night. On our way to Hualian, there were many children on the same carriage as us.

    2011-02-16 10:06:40 補充:

    Mom told me they gathered all the children to this carriage, and it was fun for me to see them brawl. When we reached the Hualian Train Station, Dad’s friend came to pick us up; he was very excited to see us.

    2011-02-16 10:06:57 補充:

    The next day, we continued the train ride to Taitung. As soon as we got to grandma and grandpa’s house, Guard, their dog, greeted us with a wagging tail. Taitung is a very beautiful place; there is no air pollution, no tall buildings, only trees, birds, and blue sky.

    2011-02-16 10:07:09 補充:

    We could hear birds singing every day. Grandpa’s house is at the foot of the hill, with a brook in front of it. The daily afternoon rain makes the mountain greener and more pleasing, and the weather is always nice.

    2011-02-16 10:07:21 補充:

    I helped grandma make the Chinese New Year Cake, Radish Cake, and more. On the Chinese New Year Eve, Dad put some wood on a wheelbarrow and lighted a fire.

    2011-02-16 10:07:28 補充:

    He remained silent when I asked him what he was doing, but later we all learned it was a “fire car”, used to warm ourselves. We all thought it was really interesting and “creative”! We had a great time during this winter vacation

    2011-02-16 19:04:51 補充:

    Oops, 漏掉一個小細節 XD

    Chinese New Year Eve = Chinese New Year's Eve

    2011-02-16 19:05:51 補充:

    To #3:

    Thanks for your compliment.

    Yes I had lived in the States since the age of 12, but I am currently back in tw.

    btw, I am Panda, not Yun XD

    你看錯了啦!

    參考資料: Pandora's Panda翻譯社
  • 9 年前

    Hi, Yun, your English is really good, have you ever lived in any English speaking country? I believe that the person who was questioning it has learned a lot from your. I am, at least!

    Do I have the pleasure to be your pen-pal? If it's OK for you, I can be reached at hommersaak@yahoo.com.tw.

  • 9 年前

    我的家人去台東慶祝農曆新年,我們去那裡坐火車,留在花蓮一個晚上。有很多孩子對鐵路運輸的道路上與我們華聯,媽媽說,他們收集所有18歲以下兒童到這輛馬車,但它仍然為我的樂趣,甚至有一個小的爭吵。當我們到達花蓮火車站,爸爸的朋友來接我們。他很興奮地看到我們。第二天,我們去台東坐火車了。當我們得到了奶奶和爺爺的房子,衛隊,爺爺狗飼料,歡迎我們用尾巴擺動。台東是一個非常美麗的地方,有沒有空氣污染,沒有高樓大廈。只有樹,鳥,藍的天空。我們可以聽到小鳥唱歌在這裡和那裡的每一天。爺爺的家在山腳下,一條小溪和前面的房子。而每天下午下雨使山更綠,更賞心悅目。那裡的天氣一直不錯。我幫奶奶做新年蛋糕和蘿蔔糕等。在農曆新年除夕夜,爸爸把一些木質獨輪車,點燃一火就可以了。他沒有說什麼,當我問他在做什麼。但後來我們都知道那是什麼,這是一個“火車”,由它來溫暖自己。這是真的很有趣,“創意”!我們有一個偉大的時間這個冠軍的假期。

    2011-02-15 19:09:24 補充:

    冀對你有助!

    參考資料: self
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