建智 發問時間: 教育與參考出國留學 · 1 0 年前

修正我的英文自傳

拜託各位英文達人幫我看自傳

可以的話給些意見喔!!

明天就要交!!

AutobiographyI am WANG CHIEN CHIH, a vocational high school’s student. There are four members in my family. My father was a professional soldier but now working in a factory. My mother is a pharmacist; my younger brother is a Hsinchu senior high school’s student. As a eldest child in my family, it makes me independent, responsible and passionate to help others.Throughout my academic years, I not only get good grades but also am very active on sport field and involved in school club activities. I joined the Track and field team. I especially enjoyed jogging in the morning. Sweating and exercising not only makes my health better, but also makes me feel full of energy in class. Apart from training myself, I can make friends and gain different valuable experiences. In the class, my English ability is more outstanding than the other subjects. I liked to discuss and share the experience of learning English with people a lot. Moreover, teaching the other can improve myself and let me know what concepts that I don’t really understand. The passion to English prompted me to go to the English contest. Although the result was not ideal, I do my best to enrich vocabulary and improve grammar. Because of the enthusiasm to English, I tried hard to pass GEPT intermediate level and finally I got it. Besides, I also get TOEIC 655 points on International certificate. Besides the professions, I have wide ranges of interests. Reading, music, movie, martial arts is the favorite when in my leisure time. As to my personality, I am determined, patient to listen to others, fond to sharing the experience with others.

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Technology always comes from humanity. In order to prepare myself for the E-era and be able to apply my interest and specialty to the workplace, I decide to major in Electrical Engineering to cultivate the ability of profession.

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I want to be a engineer in the future. I am confident that I can do well on Electrical Engineering field. For instance, the fossil fuel will be used depleted. Alternative will be the primary energy in the future. I wish you can give me an opportunity to learn more.

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And I will keep studying hard at your school. I believe that with the help of the training courses. I can become creative and capable expert.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is CHIEN-CHIH WANG. I am a vocational high school’s student. There are four members in my family. My father was a professional soldier but is now working in a factory. My mother is a pharmacist; my younger brother is a senior high school’s student in Hsinchu. As the eldest child in my family, it makes me an independent, responsible and passionate person.

    我好亂你是畢業了沒? 我假設你還沒畢業好了. I am an academically strong student. I am also very active in sports and getting involved in school club activities. I am a member of the Track and field team. I particularly enjoyed jogging in the morning. Doing exercises not only makes me a healthy and fit person, but also allows me to meet new friends and gain valuable experience.

    In school, my English is better than other subjects. I like to discuss and share the experience of learning English with people. Moreover, I could also learn new things when teaching others English. Because of my strong passion for English, I went to try different challenges for my English proficiency. Although the result was not ideal, I did my best. I continue to improve my vocabulary and grammar. Eventually, I passed the intermediate level of the General English Proficiency Test (GEPT) I also obtained a score of 655 points for TOEIC.

    Besides my passion for English, I also have a wide ranges of interests. I spend my free time reading books, listening to music, watching movies, doing martial artsme. As to my personality, I am a patient person.

    Technology always comes from humanity (這是Nokia的科技始終來自於人性嗎?). In order to prepare myself for the Age of Information and be able to apply my interest and specialty to workplace, I decide to do a major in Electrical Engineering.

    I would like to be an engineer in the future. I am confident that I will/could do well in the field of Electrical Engineering. The fossil fuel will be exhausted. An alternative will be needed to replace the non-renewable energy in the future. I hope you would give me an opportunity to learn more.

  • 6 年前

    學任何語言不外乎就是要有恆心跟毅力

    我覺得白天有工作的上班族特別適合線上學習英文

    才不用下了班就急急忙忙趕著去補習班上課

    光來回車程就省了1~2個小時,省下的時間可以多背好幾個單字

    也可以輕鬆在家線上學英文,想學好英文的人這是一個很不錯的機會

    用正確的方法一次把英文學起來!!

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  • 1 0 年前

    你可以去下面那個部落格看看,他上面有發表很多自傳翻譯、中英履歷及求職的文章和相關資料,對你的翻譯應該滿有幫助!還有一些面談面試的要領,你都可以參考喔!你若有問題也可以發問或是留言!

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    參考資料: 很實用的求職、翻譯部落格
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