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英文短文修改!!!急~~

這是我寫的一篇文章的 summary

請幫我看看有沒有文法錯誤的地方~或是用詞需要修改的!!!

很急! 謝謝囉^^

This article points out that the indigenous Brazilians protest at the capital and against the construction of dam in Amazon. The indigenous people announced that the dam will destroy the rivers, jungle and the way of their life. Despite the fact that the government promised all the population affected by the dam would be compensated and resettled, tribal leader said that the blood will be spilled to show their determination of protecting their homeland. Thought many celebrities stood with the indigenous people and showed their opinions of protecting environment, it seems no use to stop the project. Due to the construction of dam is crucial to the development as creating jobs as well as providing sufficient electricity, the licenses were finally granted by the agency of environment.

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    This article points out that the indigenous Brazilians' protest at the capital and against the construction of dam in Amazon. Theindigenous people announced that the dam would destroy the rivers, jungle and their way of life.Despite the fact that the government promised that allthe population affected by the dam would be compensated and resettled, triballeader said that the blood would be spilled toshow their determination of protecting their homeland. Though many celebrities stood with the indigenous people and expressed their opinions on protecting the environment, it seemed ofno use to stop the project. Due to the fact thatthe construction of dam is crucial to the development in creating jobs as well as providing sufficient electricity, the licenses were finally granted by the agency of environment.

    2011-03-05 18:49:16 補充:

    Amazon 》»The Amazon

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