章魚 發問時間: 教育與參考考試 · 9 年前

修改英文作文 微難 (急)

這一篇在討論富人該不該幫窮人的作文

我還沒下最後的ending

因為老師希望用詞句型要難一點,

所以可以的話

希望不要修改得太簡單

感激不盡!

The comments to the charity that China’s richest made donation among the poor man in Taiwan was hard to reach an agreement, whether Mr. Chen was described as a savior or an upstart, his behavior was not only reminded Taiwanese the existent of poverty in Taiwan, but also exposed a serious issue in the world — does the rich man has the duty to help the poor man?

On one side, the haves consider enjoy their own hard efforts of success as their right, besides; the desire of pursuing a better life could be a great motivation to stimulate the haves-not work harder. The results between the rich and the poor warn people that no one is to be took responsibility to us except ourselves.

On the other side, the haves still depend on the haves-not to create wealth for them. Most of the rich people build their career with their brain, but the hardship of a worker may not less than a manager, when the extremely unbalance revenues exists, there follows the social problems.

It seems that the haves have the responsibilities to compensate for the people who have been exploited, when the one-sixth of population have been enjoyed 80% resources in the earth, while five-sixth of population have been struggled within 20% resources. Most of the resources, especially nature resources are unrecoverable, they should pay some prices for it. Besides, power always comes with obligation, when the rich have the power to control and distribute most of the resources, taking care of disadvantage minorities became their duty.

ps.請問窮人富人是直接寫the poor就好 還是要寫the poor man?

入學禮物 應該怎麼翻呢?

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  • 9 年前
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    Whether Mr. Chen donated to the Taiwanesewho live in poverty was necessary or not was hard to reach an agreement,. Mr.Chen’s actions was not only reminded Taiwanese the existent of poverty in Taiwan,but also exposed a serious issue in the world — does the rich man has the dutyto help the poor? On one side, high classespeople considered enjoying their wealth was their rights; besides; thedesire of pursuing a better life could be a great motivation to motivate peopleto work harder. The results between the rich and the poor reminded peoplethat no one is be responsible for one’s failure. However, the top social classesdepend on cheap labor to create wealth for them. Most rich people establishtheir success without help, but the hardship of an employee may not be lessthan a manager, when the extremely unbalanced revenues increase, there followsthe social problems. It seems that the haves areresponsible for compensating the poor who have been exploited, when one-sixthof population have been enjoyed 80% resources in the earth, while five-sixth ofpopulation have been struggled within 20% resources. Most resources, especiallynature resources, are unrecoverable. On the other hand, power always comes withobligation, when the rich have the power to control and distribute most of theresources, taking care of disadvantage minorities became their duty.

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