kusosfly 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

一個簡短的英文自傳

這是一個簡單的自傳 想請各位英文好的大大幫小弟看看 小弟英文有點破只能用簡短的方式來呈現 有哪邊不對的 或是可以修改的 也請各位大大幫忙一下小弟 最近要應徵工作 想說用個簡短的介紹來表現自己想要對於這份工作的學習 麻煩一下了 謝謝...

I come from Tainan my name is XXXDepartment of Mechanical Engineering graduate in thesouthern taiwan universityMy family have four peoples father mather sister and me I have 4 year machines experience lathe, grind, and Maintains machine in my workMy interest is to learnLearns from me not to be able anythingI hope to company give me an opportunity studyI will prove in the work Because I accept the challenge

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MOM 您應該只是將我的問題丟去網頁進行翻譯吧 小弟需要的並不是這方面的解答...mother 的確是我打錯了 謝謝您的提醒... 這只是小弟要口敘並不是要紙本交出去!!!

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Learns from me not to be able anything這句不太懂您想表達的意思..可以告知中文嗎?

這句其實是 任何我不會的我都學 可以幫我改一下嗎 任何不會的我都想去學習

這位大大真的很用心噢 小弟先在此感謝了ㄒ_ㄒ

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  • 9 年前
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    - I come from Tainan my name is XXX

    先介紹自己的名字再告知是哪裡人會比較有禮貌喔

    My name is XXX. I come from Tainan.- Department of Mechanical Engineering graduate in thesouthern taiwan university這句不對應改成如下(您應該是南科大還是您想說您是來自南部畢業的學校呢?)

    如果是南科大

    I was graduated from Southern Taiwan University and my major was Mechanical Engineering.

    如果是南部的學校

    I was graduated from the university in southern Taiwan and my major was Mechanical Engineering.

    - My family have four peoples father mather sister and me 只有兩個小瑕疵喔

    My family has four people(members), father, mother, sister and I.

    這句亦可以這樣寫There are four people(members) in my family, father, mother, sister and I.- I have 4 year machines experience 您是要形容有四年操作機器的經驗還是四年工作經驗和機器相關?

    如果是四年操作機器的經驗

    I have four-year experience in machine operation.

    如果是四年工作經驗和機器相關

    I have four-year working experience in machine operation.

    - lathe, grind, and Maintains machine in my work表達這幾種您的主要工作My work includes lathe grind and machine maintenance.

    - My interest is to learnMy interest(hobby) is learning.

    - Learns from me not to be able anything這句不太懂您想表達的意思..可以告知中文嗎?

    - I hope to company give me an opportunity study您是希望公司給您上班的機會對嗎?I hope that I can get the oppotunity to enter your company. - I will prove in the work Because I accept the challenge

    我會盡力在工作上證明我的能力因為我接受任何的挑戰I will do my best to prove my own ability at work because I accept every kind of challenge.建議您也可以多形容自己的個性和您為何想進那家公司的理由會更好讓面試官更能認識您..

    2011-03-19 03:50:41 補充:

    任何不會的我都想去學習..

    也就是"我會去學習我不懂的事情"

    I'd like to learn those I don't understand.

    祝您面試順利~!

    參考資料: mich
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  • 9 年前

    來自臺南我的名字是 XXX ,机械工程畢業生的部門在南部的臺灣大學,我家有四人,父親、媽媽、姐妹和我, 我有4年機器經驗 車床,研磨,和維護,在我工作的機器,我的興趣是學會從我學會不能任何我希望對公司給我機會研究, 我在工作將证明 ,由于我接受挑戰 。

    注意:「mather」是「mother」﹝o﹞Department of Mechanical Engineering graduate in thesouthern taiwan university.Department of Mechanical Engineering graduate inthe southern taiwan university

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