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我最喜歡的季節

I like summer. When this is season coming.I always is exciting.Why?Because

the weather is the most hotter at that time. but I enjoy to bask in the sun.

However,the weather is to let me wear less.It is such a comfortable season. in the season,Ialways can play in the water or play beach ball under the sun.

Sometimes,I can left my grandma house in the country.That is good place foe me.

I often take a stool and eat watermelon in an open space. Many people can talk

with there. In summer,there become popular.Even though become hotter and hotter.Ilike is forever.This season is really bring

me to many joy.

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    I like summer. When this season is coming, I am always exciting.(am是I的be動詞 )Why?Because

    the weather is the hottest (er是比較級,最高級是+est,most+多音節(3個以上)的形容詞,hot是短音節,直接加est就好) every year (每年). I enjoy basking (enjoy為特殊動詞後面必加ing!!!) in the sun.

    The weather lets me wear less.It is such a comfortable season. However,the weather is to let me wear less.

    你寫的意思:然而,這個天氣讓我穿較少

    這邊不能用however 這個單字是有反詰的意思...

    翻中文就不太對摟~

    In summer,I can always play in the water or play beach ball under the sun.

    always(頻率副詞)的位置:be動詞後,一般動詞前

    Sometimes,I can stay at (短暫停留在...某地) my grandma's house in the country.That is a good place for me.

    I often sit on a stool and eat watermelon in an open space. Many people can talk

    with me there. In summer, the place become so popular .Even though the weather is becoming hotter and hotter.I still (仍舊 ) like it forever.

    This season is really bring me to many joy.

    改成以下 This season really brings me many joy.

    is和bring都是動詞 不可以用兩個 to 拿掉

    ok大致上是這樣~

    有疑問歡迎指教:)

    希望對你有幫助唷!!

    2011-03-19 16:33:06 補充:

    阿阿 最後面的joy可以+s!

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    6 年前

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  • 10 年前

    When this is season coming.

    When this season coming.

    I always is exciting.

    I am always exciting.

    but I enjoy to bask in the sun.

    but 要大寫

    the weather is to let me wear less

    the weather is let me wear less

    I can left my grandma house in the country.

    grandma's house

    Many people can talk with there.

    Many people can talk there.

    Ilike is forever.

    I like it forever.

    有些句點完也要大寫開頭...

    以上是我的看法@@

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