求更好的英文翻譯

原文

I followed her into her kitchen,which smelled like the wonderful Korean foods I was coming to love .

翻譯

我跟著她到她的廚房,味道像美妙的韓國料理我要來的愛。

有人能給我更好的翻譯嗎? I was coming to love. 這句我翻不順

原文

Her life was a constant struggle of battling infection and looking for her next breath .

翻譯

她的一生,是不斷的鬥爭,對抗感染和尋找她的下一次呼吸。

拜託擅長英文的各位幫忙修正指導 看能不能有更好的翻譯

我的英文老師是完美主義者 喜歡吹毛求疵

所以我希望能夠做到最好

拜託各位幫我這個忙 謝謝!!

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  • 10 年前
    最佳解答

    I followed her into her kitchen,which smelled like the wonderful Korean foods

    I was coming to love .

    廚房傳來一陣如我一度喜愛的美味韓國風食物(或韓式料理)香味於是我跟著她走進了那裡。 I was coming to love. <---這句就好像 麥當勞有一句 廣告詞:I'm lovin it.= I'm loving in it.

    表示一段時間的狀態(喜歡某事物的狀態,但非指永遠喜歡)

    Her life was a constant struggle of battling infection and looking for her next breath .

    她的一生不斷因病痛的侵染而掙札,

    找尋下一次的呼吸(意譯:因疾病而要努力與病魔抗爭,求得下一秒生存的可能)而奮鬥 。

    圖片參考:http://a.imagehost.org/0959/01-1.jpg

    2011-03-22 18:11:17 補充:

    I followed her into her kitchen,which smelled like the wonderful Korean foods I was coming to love . 試著分析一下句子,全都是過去時態,

    I followed her into her kitchen<----我跟著她進了廚房(已經進了)

    which smelled like the wonderful Korean foods <---

    聞到一縷像美味韓式料理的味道(已經聞到了)

    2011-03-22 18:11:21 補充:

    I was coming to love . <--- come to 本來就有表變成,達到(某種狀態)之意,

    用 was come+ing to love ----表過去某段時間曾經喜愛的意思。

    如果翻成: 逐漸逐漸的變得喜愛,表示狀態仍未停止;

    則應是: I am coming to love.....這種形式。

    參考資料: my brain+dictionary, 語法結構, 語法結構
  • 10 年前

    個人意見,謹供參考:

    我跟著她進入她的廚房,那兒聞起來像我就要愛上的美妙韓國料理。

    她的生活,是不斷的鬥爭,為打擊感染與希望得到下一次呼吸的機會。

  • 10 年前

    I followed her into her kitchen,which smelled like the wonderful Korean foods I was coming to love .

    我跟隨著她進入她的廚房,它聞起來就像那我逐漸變得喜愛美妙的韓國食物一般.

    I was coming to love:意喻逐漸的變得喜愛某項事物.

    Her life was a constant struggle of battling infection and looking for her next breath .

    她的一生就是不斷與細菌感染的搏鬥和尋找他呼吸下一口氣息的掙扎.

    希望有幫助

    參考資料: jim
  • 10 年前

    I followed her into her kitchen,which smelled like the wonderful Korean foods I was coming to love . :

    我跟隨了她入她的廚房,嗅到像美妙的韓國食物我來臨愛。

    Her life was a constant struggle of battling infection and looking for her next breath :

    她的生活是作戰的傳染和尋找她的下次呼吸恆定的奮鬥。

    參考資料: 雅虎字典
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