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匿名使用者 發問時間: 藝術與人文詩詞與文學 · 9 年前

請幫我訂正我的短篇日記中文翻譯英文的文法,謝謝!

以下是我的日記,我想把它翻為英文:

昨天我的同學Layla問我:妳有打工過嗎?作過那些?

我回想了一下,發現真的還不少:

我曾經在肯德基當服務生、在國稅局協助報稅、在茶坊當吧臺、當推銷員、在服飾店賣衣服、還有,從事寵物美容。

第一份打工是在高中暑假的時侯,因為只有二個月的時間,就選擇了到kfc打工,在裡面工作很辛苦卻也很開心,因為每天都要在很熱的廚房炸雞、也要洗廁所、但開心的是我們的員工餐是可以免費吃所有kfc的餐點!

在國稅局打工,雖然只是短短的1個月,我卻因此在很年輕的時侯就知道該如何報稅了而且還可以協助別人!

最特別的應該就是在寵物店工作了,我學習到如何幫寵物清潔及美容、如何照顧寵物讓牠們健健康康、如何訓練牠們有良好的生活習慣,所以我很自豪我現在可以靠自已把自已的寵物照顧的很好!而我也在這工作中認識了許多好朋友!我的打工經驗很多,讓我吸收了很多社會經驗,但如果再從來一次我想我會多留一點時間讓自已在學校完成學業!英文:

Yesterday, my classmate Layla asked me: Do you have to work before? Made those?

I thought for a moment back, that really has a lot of:

I have worked in Kentucky as a waiter, to assist in the Internal Revenue Service tax returns, in the tea house as the bar, as a salesman, selling clothes in the clothing store, and, in pet grooming.

The first summer in high school working at the right time, because only two months time, they chose to kfc work, work very hard in there but also very happy because every day in the hot kitchen fried chicken, have to wash the toilet, but the happy meal of our employees are free to eat all meals kfc!

The IRS to work, although only a short period of 1 month, so I was very young at the right time to know how to tax the people but also to help!

Should be the most special work in the pet store, and I learn how to help pets clean and beauty, how to care for pets to make them perfectly healthy, how to train them to have good habits, so I am proud that I can rely on their own to their own good pet care! And I also know that a lot of good friends at work! Many of my working experience, I absorbed a lot of social experience, but should never again I think I will stay a little time for themselves to complete their studies in school!

我想應該有很多錯誤的地方,可以請英文好手幫我看一下我的文法及翻譯如何修正嗎?謝謝大家了!!

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  • Chucky
    Lv 5
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    昨天我的同學Layla問我:妳有打工過嗎?作過那些?

    我回想了一下,發現真的還不少:

    "Did you have part-time works before? And what were they?", one of my classmates, Layla, asked me yesterday. I found out I had quite a few part-time experience after I considered the question.

    我曾經在肯德基當服務生、在國稅局協助報稅、在茶坊當吧臺、當推銷員、在服飾店賣衣服、還有,從事寵物美容。

    I've ever been a clerk in KFC, helped declaring goods in IRS, made tea drink in a tea store, served as a sals person, worked in a cloth retail store, and worked in a pet shop, etc.

    第一份打工是在高中暑假的時侯,因為只有二個月的時間,就選擇了到kfc打工,在裡面工作很辛苦卻也很開心,因為每天都要在很熱的廚房炸雞、也要洗廁所、但開心的是我們的員工餐是可以免費吃所有kfc的餐點!

    I started my first part-time work in summer vacations of senior high. I choose to be a clerk in KFC because I only had two-months short break. It was a tiring work but interesting to me. Although I had to fried chicken in an extremely hot kitchen everyday, and cleaned washrooms, happily, I, as a clerk in KFC, could have all kinds of meals without any charge.

    在國稅局打工,雖然只是短短的1個月,我卻因此在很年輕的時侯就知道該如何報稅了而且還可以協助別人!

    Later, I worked in IRS. Although I only spent a short month right there, I learned how to declare goods and assisted other tax payers.

    最特別的應該就是在寵物店工作了,我學習到如何幫寵物清潔及美容、如何照顧寵物讓牠們健健康康、如何訓練牠們有良好的生活習慣,所以我很自豪我現在可以靠自已把自已的寵物照顧的很好!而我也在這工作中認識了許多好朋友!我的打工經驗很多,讓我吸收了很多社會經驗,但如果再從來一次我想我會多留一點時間讓自已在學校完成學業!

    Therefore, working in a pet shop should be the most impressing work to me. I learned how to wash and clean pets' bodies, to take good care of them, and to train them to form good habbits. That was why I could take good care of my own pets so well by myself. Furthermore, I made lots of friends when I served in the pet shop. I had gotten much part-time experience and absorbed in various social knowledge, but I hoped to spend more time on my study and make it better if I could.

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