Japan 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

請幫忙修改此篇有關"Donation"英文,多謝。

請各位大大幫忙修改此篇有關"Donation"英文,唔該。

Doating money to charity

This year it encountered earthquake and tsunami in Japan. Many people don't have food, cloth, and money, even a house. We need to help them.

There are several ways to collect money.

Firstly, you can donate money by credit card, if you could.

Secondly, you can also donate invoice to donation box. It is a chance of hope and love.

Thirdly, you can donate money though 7-11 ibon, Family FamiPort, and so on.

To sum up, 幫助他人也就是幫助自己。

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  • 9 年前
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    (Donating money to charity) – If this is the 1st paragraph, then it must be grammatically incorrect; but if this is the title of the article, then it is fine.

    This year it (What is the “it” refers to?) A dynamic encountered (“it” cannot encounter earthquake) earthquake and tsunami had crashed in Japan, causing devastating damages in cities and huge number of deaths. Besides, the upcoming radiation leakage has led to severe condemnation to the nearby ecosystem and chemically poisoned the sea-creatures, affecting the whole country economy. Undoubtedly, there are many people still haven’t had enough food, clothes, and money in sustaining their basic lives, even building small houses may be a big problem as well. Therefore to be a sympathetic citizen in the Earth Village, we should do our very best to help them.

    There are several ways to raise fund for the Japanese as shown below, Firstly, you can donate money by credit card. Secondly, you can also donate invoice to donation box. It is a chance of hope and love. (Explain more what this method is about)

    Thirdly, you can donate money through 7-11 ibon, Family FamiPort and other possible methods.

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