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中文: 沙拉非常的有錢,她的爸爸讓她到貴族學校學習‧ 因為沙拉非常的有錢,所以有些同學不喜歡沙拉。 然後,沙拉常常被同學欺負。有一天因為沙拉的父親破產了, 所以她變成了一位傭人,但是她還是很善良。 我們應該學習她的優點。 英文: Salad is very rich. Her father let her to the Aristocrat school study. Because Salad is very rich,some schoolmate doesn't like Salad. And then,Salad is bullied by that schoolmate. One day... 顯示更多 中文:
沙拉非常的有錢,她的爸爸讓她到貴族學校學習‧
因為沙拉非常的有錢,所以有些同學不喜歡沙拉。
然後,沙拉常常被同學欺負。有一天因為沙拉的父親破產了,
所以她變成了一位傭人,但是她還是很善良。
我們應該學習她的優點。

英文:
Salad is very rich. Her father let her to the Aristocrat school study.
Because Salad is very rich,some schoolmate doesn't like Salad.
And then,Salad is bullied by that schoolmate. One day ,
because Salad's father is bankruptcy,she become a servant.
Although,she become a servant,but she is very softie.
We should learn her advantage.


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