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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

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標題是 Informal Interview,請幫我改文法,謝謝。My formal interview was conducted with Bob, who is a 32 years old Asian male and lives AR presently. He thinks he should take most of the responsibility for family since he is the oldest of three siblings and both of his parents were retired. Bob has lived in the US almost 3 years and he is served as a statistician during these years. Although he likes the job and own enough professional knowledge, he still worries if it is OK to keep the job for a long term because his insufficient reading and comprehensive speed already lead slower working achievement while comparing with the rest of statisticians, no matter ESL ones or not. Bob experienced the school years and obtained all diplomas in homeland. He was interested in mathematics courses and always got excellent grades; on the other hand, he was unable to get expected outcomes in English classes very often. He did not enjoy reading activities because of limited patience and interests. However, he is forced to improve reading abilities because his job needs to read a large number of studies, research results or papers all the time and it will be better if write enough papers yearly as well. Although he tried to improve reading skills by watching interesting video clips or TV programs with subtitle, for example, shows from Animal Planet, HBO channels and some funny programs. Consequently, he really hopes that I can improve his situation; of course, he is still trying his best to find suitable approaches. Tasting gourmet food, playing video games, and listening to music or radio to get latest information are all his favorite hobbies. He mentioned that he would love to meet together whenever needed in order to make his reading skills better. Finally, I can tell that he values family very much because he ended our interview by stating that he will buy a house to live with parents in the future and take care of 2 younger brothers as much as he can whether become a rich person.

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    My formal interview was conducted with Bob, who was a 32year old Asian male living in AR. He thought he should take most of theresponsibility of the family since he was the oldest of three siblings and bothparents were retired. Bob had lived in the US for almost 3 years while working asa statistician. Although he liked the job and was professionallyknowledgeable, he worried if he could keep the job for the long term amid hisinsufficient reading and comprehensionskills relative to his peers. Bob completed his schools and obtained all diplomas in hishometown. He was interested in mathematics and always had excellent grades; on the other hand,he seldom thrived in English classes. He did not enjoy reading because oflimited patience and interests. However, he was forced to improve readingabilities because his job needed to read a large number of studies, researchresults and papers and it would be helpful to his career for him to publish some papers yearly as well. He tried to improve reading skills by watchingvideo clips or TV programs with subtitle, for example, shows from Animal Planet, HBOchannels and some comedies. He hoped that I could help him to improve his skills while he continued trying his best to find other suitableapproaches.Gourmet foods, video games, music and listening to news werehis favorite hobbies. He mentioned that he would love to get together wheneverneeded for me to help him to improve his reading skills. Finally, I could tell that he valuedhis family very much because he ended our interview by stating that he would buya house to live with his parents in the future and to take care of the youngerbrothers.

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