蛙ㄦ、、 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

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因為要英文朗讀了,想請問大家,我打的這篇有沒有問題幫我修改一下,謝謝My family isn't rich and very ordinary, from my childhood to now,my parents don't often give us negative thoughts and behaviors,it let us grow up so happy,Even in junior high school,my father died because of cancer , My mother's strong and independent, let us to continue to face the future happiness, even our life is not rich, even as single-parent families, we are still optimistic about the life.My family is happy, every day there is always laughter, we don't often complain, and we will bravely face the difficulties encountered.my father has passed away for four years,although I miss him, though he is not here, but I know he would silently support us.And my mother, really is a strong womaneven with so many difficulties,she never complained, My mother and I are like friendsalways talk about many things,so I am glad I have such a great motherFinally, I want to thank my mother and father gave us a such great family

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  • 10 年前
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    1. 記住...兩個clause 放在一起.其中有一個會是Independent clause, 另外一個是dependent clause, 請不要忘記放coordinating conjunction跟逗號, 不然就用句號分開成兩個句子(coordinating conjunction 是 for and nor but or yet)

    2.from my childhood to now,my parents don't often give us negative thoughts and behaviors,

    你打算要說從你是小孩到現在, 妳的父母從來沒給妳錯誤的觀念跟心態, 那你可以寫成My parents have never given us any negative thoughts and behaviors since I was child.

    用present perfect大家就看的懂了~不需要用from my childhood to now.

    3.你這句Even in junior high school,my father died because of cancer 會讓人誤以為你父親在一間國中去世, 你要講清楚是當你在念國中的時候你父親過世

    4. 下面Underline是我改過的地方, 注意標表符號跟大小寫. 還有冠詞!

    我只幫你改前面

    My family isn't rich and very ordinary. My parents have never given us any negative thoughts and behaviors since I was child, and they raised us happily. Even if my father died because of the cancer when I studied in the junior high school, my mother was still strong and independent.

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