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自從大二時,我加入了系學會 我發現到很多事情並不是那麼容易可以做好 但是我學到很多東西 第一 讓我最難忘的事是寫企劃書,這是需要許多成員們一起討論後才有的結果,這不是一件簡單的事。第二 讓我學習到金錢的管控,錢如何節省使用 最後 是讓我學習到辦一個活動很不簡單

Since I joined the student association, I discovered that many things were not easy to do. I have learned a lot of things. First, the most memorable thing I written project .This project came from the hard efforts of teamwork. This was not anything but easy things. Second, I learned how to control money, and saved it. Finally, I learned the activities held by the student association. Sometimes I even felt frustrated because of some problem, however, I instead of giving up. I spent more time to learn.

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  • 9 年前
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    以下是改寫後的段落文章,紅字部份是經過修改部份,為配合正確的語法,內容略有增減,希望能正確表達你的心聲:

    Since I joined the student association when I was in the second year, I have found that doing everything well was not easy. However , I have learned a lot of things from

    it .

    First, the most unforgetable thing for me was that we had to write project by ourselves.The

    project was finished by hard working of the whole team. It was not an easy thing as I thought. Second, I also

    learned how to make good use of money, and became economical anytime. Finally, the student association makes me understand that it is not easy to hold activities. We have to put emphasis on every part of activities in details.

    Sometimes I even felt frustrated because of some problems , however, I decided to devote myself to

    the club and spend more time learning from it instead of giving up.

    參考資料: 英語教師
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