幫我看看文法及語句通不通順(只能今天,拜託了)

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請幫我看看文法及語句通不通順

只剩今天

所以拜託了

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(不要叫我用翻譯機,那個都很爛)

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I have a computer.

I love it.

I always use it on weekend.

Computers have many uses.

They can surf the Net and play computer games.

If i without its would be very bored .

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I have a computer.

I love it.

I love it so much.

I always use it on weekend.

I always use it on weekends.

Computers have many uses.

Computers are useful for us.

They can surf the Net and play computer games.

We can surf the net with the computer and play computer games.

If i without its would be very bored .

It will be bored for everyone without the computers.

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