席德 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

有英文的專業人士能幫我看看這些自翻的中翻英的句子跟劇情嗎?

全部都是自己翻的,但我英文程度並不是很高,希望有對英文相當有實力的人能幫我看看,並改正,謝謝~期限只有今天到明天早上,所以要快><"謝謝!

奉上20點!!

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唐老大Dominic

唐老大、布萊恩和蜜雅再一次膽大包天的劫囚車行動後逃到巴西。他試著保持低調,但是當他發現他們必須永遠從人間消失,他們就被迫找來一些老朋友幹最後一票。

Once again, After a plunder the prison van act audacious in the extreme, they fled and going to Brazil. He tried to keep low,but he to become they must disspear,so they did a last advanture by constraint.

布萊恩Brian

原先是臥底於唐老大飆車集團的他,愛上了唐老大的妹妹蜜雅。後來成為他們的一份子,跟隨唐老大逃到巴西,因為非常缺前決定幹最後一票。

Originally,he was act as a stool pigeon in the Dominic Dominic’s Street Racing a group,then he fall in to loved Dominic’sister,Mia. Finally become their a member,following Dominic to escape from Brazil.

哈柏Hobbs

哈柏是一個作風強悍的美國外交安全局特別探員,他負責追捕唐老大.但當他追到了里約熱內盧,他卻發現他的敵人也許不是唐老大...。

Hobbs is a serious National Security Agency special representative,and he have a responsibility of arrest Dominic. However,when he trace back Dominic to Rio de Janeiro,but he find maybe his enemy not Dominic…….

蜜雅Mia

身為唐老大的妹妹,以及布萊恩的真命天女,一直在他對哥哥的愛及他的非法行為間天人交戰。

Dominic’s sister,and Brian’s right,and still dilemma between in she faced to her loved with brother and his illegal practice.

泰吉Tej

泰吉是修車和科技的高手,唐老大答應他會分到一千一百萬美元。

Tej is the master of repairs vehicle and technology, Dominic promises him to share the money of $ 100 million dollars.

文斯Vince

唐老大的麻吉,也是唐老大飆車集團的成員,曾經在搶劫一台貨車時失手

中彈。

Dominic 's good friend,also he was Dominic’s Street Racing group's member, once when robbed a freight wagon losed and strucked by a bullet.

羅曼Roman

是布萊恩一起長大的麻吉,羅曼喜歡賭博.這次他希望能跟布萊恩大幹一票,好好享受分到的錢。

Roman closed friends of childhood with Brian.Roman like gamble.Now he want to doing the big advanture,and enioying the money.

姬寶兒Gisele

雖然她是唐老大最後擊垮的大毒梟的女人,但他一接到消息就趕去幫助唐

老大。

Even though,she is drug lord who was defeated by Dominic,but she receiveing Dominic need to help,she right now to help.

桑托Santos

唐老大的手下,當他聽說要在里約熱內盧幹下一億元美金的案子,他就立

刻趕來。

Dominic’s subordinat,when he knowing robbing $ 100 million dollars in Rio de Janeiro,and he must hurried come right away.

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  • 最佳解答

    大大你好

    經閱覽後略為修正如下(不同處以顏色標示):

    Once again, after the audacious prison van act in theextreme, Dominic, Brian, and Mia fled to Brazil. He tried to keep low,but when they found out they must vanish from the planet once and for all, they were forced to do crap with their old friends for the last time.

    Brian

    Originally a stool pigeon in the Dominic’s StreetRacing group, he fell in love with Dominic’sister,Mia. Eventually he became part of the group, following Dominic to Brazil. A lack of money made him decide to do crap one last time with Dominic.

    Mia

    Dominic’s sister and Brian’s Mrs.Right, she has been constantly facing ascension between her love for her brother and her hatred of his illegal activities.

    Tej

    A master of vehicle repairing and technology, Dominic promises a reward of 11 million US dollars to him.

    Vince

    Dominic 's best friend,also a member of Dominic’s Street Racing group. Failed once during a van robbery.

    Roman

    A friend of Dominic who grew up with him together. He likes to gamble. This time he expects to do something big and enjoy the plunder.

    Gisele

    A female who was also the last drug lord defeated by Dominic. Despite the hideous past, she still help Dominic as soon as she heard the news.

    Santos

    As Dominic’s subordinat, he immediately rushed to Dominic upon knowing the 100 million US dollars robbery about to happen in Rio de Janeiro.

    這樣應該就沒什麼問題了,加油囉!!好好演戲吧!!

    參考資料: 英文字典
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