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Dear Kano-san 1. FedEx picked up the invoice(TINV-2011083) this afternoon. The tracking number is 8742 7958 3768. 2. New PO from UMC8C as below: The shipment date on PO#1546524-08C1ZZF (4EA) is June 30. And please recheck the new PO(PO#1545882-08D1ZZF) from UMC8D, I would like to change the shipment date on July 4 to June 30. Best Regard!

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  • 10 年前
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    沒有什麼不對,只是一些小小的標點符號而已

    文法拼音都沒什麼錯誤

    Dear Kano-san 1. FedEx picked up the invoice (TINV-2011083)this afternoon. The tracking number is 8742 7958 3768. 2. New PO from UMC8C as below: Theshipment date on PO#1546524-08C1ZZF (4EA) is June 30. And please recheck the new PO (PO#1545882-08D1ZZF)from UMC8D; I would like to change the shipment date on July 4 to June 30. Best Regard!

    大致上這樣吧

    只是一些無關痛癢的小地方而已

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