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我英文不太好我希望能幫我訂正我英文錯誤的地方還有錯誤的語法

中文:

我是一個來自高雄的小孩,自從看到課本第11課後我發現真的要注意空氣污染的問題,以前的高雄都注重工業發展,導致空氣污染很嚴重,自從開始注意市區的空氣品質後,開始有了一連串的政策,興建腳踏車步道、宣導多搭乘大眾捷運、讓市區的污染減到最低。 小時候一出門回到家臉上都是灰暗的,導致我不喜歡出門,推廣政策後幾年大家都有了觀念後,都會騎腳踏車、搭公車、捷運、高鐵、火車、……,去上班上課。以後有了輕軌後,相信高雄一定是美麗的海洋都市。

英文:I am a child from Kaohsiung, 11 after-school textbooks since that I find really want to pay attention to air pollution, the previous focus on industrial development in Kaohsiung have led to very serious air pollution, since the city started to look after the air quality Began with a series of policies, the construction of bicycle trails, take public transit promotion, so to minimize the pollution of urban areas.

Childhood home of a face is dark out, cause I do not like to go out to promote the policy after several years we have a concept, can ride a bike, take the bus, rapid transit, high-speed rail, trains, ... ..., to School and work. With the future light rail, it is believed must be the beautiful ocean of Kaohsiung city.~

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  • 匿名使用者
    9 年前
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    版主您好:

    這樣比較通順;

    am one

    from Gaoxiong's child, after seeing the textbook 11th class I discovered really must pay attention to the air pollution the question, the beforehand Gaoxiong pays great attention the industrial development, causes the air pollution to be very serious, after starting pays attention to the urban district the air quality, starts to have a succession of policy, constructs the bicycle footpath, the guidance to travel by populace DORTS, to let the urban district the pollution reduce lowly. In childhood as soon as went out returns to the family face is gloomy, caused me not to like going out, after promoted policy latter several years everybody had the idea, could ride the bicycle, ride the public vehicle, DORTS, the high-valence iron, the train, ......, goes to work attends class. After later had the light rail, believed that Gaoxiong certainly is the beautiful sea metropolis.

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  • 9 年前

    I was a child from Kaohsiung, since after seeing textbook lesson 11th I found really pay attention to the problems of air pollution, Kaohsiung before focusing on industrial development, leading to air pollution is very serious, since the note after the air quality in the urban area, began a series of policy, construction of a bicycle trail, advocates taking mass transit systems, minimizing pollution in the urban area.

    When a face is gray out back to home, cause I don't like to go out, after a few years after everyone has the concept of promotion policy, will ride a bicycle, bus, subway, and high speed rail, trains, sth, went to work in class. After later there is a light rail, sure Kaohsiung is a beautiful Ocean City.

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