B Wu 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

英文句子修改,英文前輩請幫我解答~

幾題句子,前面是答案,要修改或刪除,煩請也解釋一下前後詞性與文法關係,

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C 1. Old-growth forests are definedas being at least 250 years old, though some forests to be actually far older, with afew approaching one thousand years.

C 2. Drawing uponnatural body movements, Isadora Duncan gave her audiences dances that stressingemotional responses to symphonic music.

C 3. The American eel isbeing studied in the hope that information about its migration and feeding habits will beexplained why its numbers are decreasing.

B 4. Most of people knowwhat they should been doing to live a healthy lifestyle, but sometimes they failto measure up to the perfectly balanced picture of health.

A 5. On days of extreme heat, thekeeping cool for just a few hours each day, even in an air-conditioned buildinglobby or a movie theater, can save lives.

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第2題 是 改成stressed 還是 stress ??

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  • PONY
    Lv 7
    9 年前
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    C 1. Old-growth forests are defined as being at least 250 years old, though some forests to be actually far older, with a few approaching one thousand years.解答: to be 要改成 are (though 連接詞後所接的是個原本可獨立的完整句子,主詞是forests 複數,所以be動詞用are ) C 2. Drawing upon natural body movements, Isadora Duncan gave her audiences dances that stressing emotional responses to symphonic music.解答: stressing要改成 stress (that是關代;如果沒有這個關代,才用stressing) C 3. The American eel is being studied in the hope that information about its migration and feeding habits will be explained why its numbers are decreasing.解答: be explained (被動)要改成 will explain (主動);用某資訊將可解答某事物 that information will explain用主動語態即可 B 4. Most of people know what they should been doing to live a healthy life style, but sometimes they fail to measure up to the perfectly balanced picture of health.解答:been doing要改成 have done ,因should have done表示應該做甚麼而事實上沒做到 A 5. On days of extreme heat, the keeping cool for just a few hours each day, even in an air-conditioned building lobby or a movie theater, can save lives.解答:the keeping cool 要改成 keeping cool ;在此動名詞當主詞用,汎指一般的 “保持涼爽”這件事,不需加the 定冠詞

    2011-06-13 00:33:53 補充:

    Oops! Sorry!

    第二題 配合 gave 的過去式 所以也要改成stressed

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    9 年前

    C 1. Old-growth forests are definedas being at least 250 years old, though some forests to be actually far older, with afew approaching one thousand years.

    最後由though所帶出的讓步子句缺了動詞,所以to be應改成are

    C 2. Drawing upon natural body movements, Isadora Duncan gave her audiences dances that stressing emotional responses to symphonic music.

    由that所帶出的形容詞子句缺動詞,故stressing宜改成stressed.

    C 3. The American eel is being studied in the hope that information about its migration and feeding habits will be explained why its numbers are decreasing.

    按照上下文語意被動的will be explained應改用主動的will explain

    B 4. Most of people know what they should been doing to live a healthy lifestyle, but sometimes they fail to measure up to the perfectly balanced picture of health.

    been doing不合文法,在should後面不會用過去分詞been,故應將been doing改成do

    A 5. On days of extreme heat, thekeeping cool for just a few hours each day, even in an air-conditioned buildinglobby or a movie theater, can save lives.

    2011-06-12 17:28:00 補充:

    5. On days of estreme heat, the keeping cool for just a few hours each day, even in an air-condioned building lobby or a movie theather, can save lives.

    動名詞keeping不需要加定冠詞,因為按上下文來看,它應該沒有特定的意思.故the keeping應改成keeping

    2011-06-12 22:46:43 補充:

    因為這句的主要動詞gave是過去式,後面子句的動詞應與其取得時態的一致(都是過去發生的事),所以要用stressed過去式.

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