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麻煩各位大大幫我改一下這篇文章 順便告訴我你們給我的評語與分數(滿分為75) 謝謝! A colorful gardenI think an ideal garden should be colorful. I have a beautiful garden in my home town. There are many plants in my garden. The charming rose and fragrant lily are in the right side. The generous tree peony and shiny sunflower are in the left side. Of... 顯示更多 麻煩各位大大幫我改一下這篇文章
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A colorful gardenI think an ideal garden should be colorful. I have a beautiful garden in my home town. There are many plants in my garden. The charming rose and fragrant lily are in the right side. The generous tree peony and shiny sunflower are in the left side. Of course, the tasty vegetable is indispensable in my garden. There are many cabbages and cauliflowers in front of the rose. I can smell attractive fragrance form the rose. The sunflower makes me powerful when I felt upset. They are my favorite family members. I think I will grow the other flowers and vegetables in the future.
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