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菜頭BOSS 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

英文文章~請會英文的大大幫忙檢查~

如標題~請英文不錯的大大幫忙檢查我寫的文章~((應該說是小介紹@.@

請在我錯誤的句型旁加以註解~希望能越詳細越好唷~謝謝各位~((鞠躬~

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第一篇:

I'm so sorry that I don't have any postcards of cars to give you.There are a lots

Aleurites Mpntana in May in Peingsi.The train that travel in Aleurites Mpntana

is trolley.Peingsi also have a custom that leave the sky lanterns which people

write the hopes on.When the sky lanterns fly in the sky,the shining wishes

already float in everyone's heart.

比對中文之1:

我非常抱歉我沒有任何關於車子的明信片能夠給你.五月的平溪有很多的油桐花.

這輛行駛於油桐花之中的火車是導覽列車.平溪也有一個習俗.放出人們寫上願望

的天燈.當天燈飛上天空,那閃亮的希望已經飄入大家的心中.

第二篇:

This postcard was bought from Tamsui which a town is located in Taipei from

me.This postcard is very special because it have a different shape which look

likes Taiwan.The picture of the postcard is Taipei 101 that the tallest building

in Taiwan.To look out into from the watchtower,the beautiful scenery hold a

panoramic view.When I stood on the highest place in Taiwan ,I saw a

prosperous country ,and the limitless hopes.

比對中文之2:

這張明信片是被我從坐落於台北的淡水買來的,這張明信片非常特別,因為它有一

個不一樣的形狀,像台灣的形狀.這個在明信片上的圖案是台灣最高的建築,台北

101.從瞭望台上眺望,這些美景盡收眼底.當我站在全台灣最高的地方時,我看見一

個繁榮的城市.以及無限的希望.

..................................................分隔先生.................................................

希望大大能~很仔細~~~的幫我校對~其實我中文翻譯也有多處不通順...請大大

見諒><~~謝謝各位~辛苦溜~

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希望各位能幫忙補充~正確的文法解釋~跟我錯誤的原因~謝謝-.-

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  • 9 年前
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    I'm so sorry that I don't have any postcards of cars to give you.There are a lot Aleurites Mpntana in May in Peingsi. The train that travels in Aleurites Mpntana is the trolley. There is a tradition in Peingsi where the people attach their wishes onto a lantern and release it into the sky. Once the lantern is there, that sparkling piece hope floats into everyone's heart.

    This postcard was bought from Tamsui, which a town located near where I live, Taipei. This postcard is very special because it is in the shape of Taiwan itself. The picture on the postcard is Taipei 101, the tallest building

    in Taiwan. From the watchtower, It offers a panoramic view with a beautiful scenery.When I stand in the highest place in Taiwan, I see a prosperous country with limitless hopes.

    希望有幫到你, 我把我有修改的地方變成紅色的!

    參考資料: 我住在美國
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