I look terrific when I am wearing my favorite formal dress. This dress is the birthday gift I got from one of my best friends. The clothes has the pattern which I like. All these pattern look so true to life that I am cheer up as well.
- joseLv 610 年前最佳解答
.My favorite, formal dress looks terrific on me. It was a birthday gift from my best friend. Not only the colors but also the exotic pattern I’ve been dreaming of. It fits me so well that I thought it was coustom made just for me.With this dress on I am on the top of the world.
custom made 是定做的意思
- LouisLv 710 年前
第一句的主題是I look terrific，後面的句子應該給予支援，說明為何你在穿這件洋裝會好看。後面的句子不要離題了。作文的每一段要圍繞著同一個主題，加以充分發展。不是字數湊夠就好。
- ?Lv 710 年前