翁昵 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 10 年前

英文作文 幫找錯!急~

  I look terrific when I am wearing my favorite formal dress.  This dress is the birthday gift I got from one of my best friends.  The clothes has the pattern which I like.  All these pattern look so true to life that I am cheer up as well.

以上是我寫的,我知道寫的很爛!

請英文好的幫我看有沒有句型錯誤的地方!

可以的話看可不可以幫我加到50個字(不包刮標點符號)~

上面沒數錯的話應該是48個字!

感恩!!

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  • jose
    Lv 6
    10 年前
    最佳解答

    .My favorite, formal dress looks terrific on me. It was a birthday gift from my best friend. Not only the colors but also the exotic pattern I’ve been dreaming of. It fits me so well that I thought it was coustom made just for me.With this dress on I am on the top of the world.   

    custom made 是定做的意思

    55個字

  • Louis
    Lv 7
    10 年前

    第一句的主題是I look terrific,後面的句子應該給予支援,說明為何你在穿這件洋裝會好看。後面的句子不要離題了。作文的每一段要圍繞著同一個主題,加以充分發展。不是字數湊夠就好。

  • ?
    Lv 7
    10 年前

    建議po上原文(中文)喔!

    方便對照檢查!

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