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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

幫我檢查文法或單字有無拼錯(極短)

This is a bookthat writesstoriesofGreek mythology, and many exciting role, scene and story as if that is true. Some of the storiessay that the coexistence between people, the others say that peoplemeet with god beast .

可以幫我檢查文法有哪些錯誤嗎?

還有lessthan 400 words

是指要寫少於400字嗎?

>口<拜託拜託~感激不盡

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This is a book that writes stories of Greek mythology

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TO lobo

this is a book that telling stories of Greek mythology的telling為什麼要用ing呢?that不是關代嗎?

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TO lobo~

可以試著解釋看看~我超想知道的

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    有關您提出的疑問,敝人謹答覆於下:

    This is a book that writes stories of Greek mythology, and many exciting role, scene and story as if that is true. Some of the stories say that the coexistence between people, the others say that people meet with god beast.

    應修正的部分條列敘述如下:

    1、首先,請原發問者要注意一下,兩個單字間記得要放空格,以免造成閱讀上的困擾及語意上的誤會。

    2、that 後方是不能接上telling 的,不過可以直接省略that,並把telling當作動詞現在分辭構成的形容詞,後位修飾book。

    3、考慮到後方的"of",請於stories前方加上定冠詞"the"比較適切。many後方的所有名詞應該選擇複數形(加上s),且many前方的"and"可以略去,以免句子累贅。

    4、as if後方接的是與過去事實相反的假設語句,宜選用過去完成是"had been"。

    5、"the coexistence between people"本身是一個名詞組而不是子句,可以直接作為動詞"say"的受詞,前方不必再加上that。

    6、沒有"meet with"這種說法,因為meet是及物動詞,可以直接省略with;或者是改寫成"be met with"這個片語(遭遇),beast此字為可數名詞,請於前方加上冠詞或改用複數形。

    整個段落改寫如下:(紅字為宜修正的部份,[ ]中的字可刪去)

    This is a book that tells the stories of Greek mythology, [and] many exciting roles, scenes and stories as if they had been true. Some of the stories discuss [that] the coexistence between people, while the others talk about the incidents which people were met with gods and beasts.

    希望我的回答有幫助到您,若有任何疑問歡迎再度提出,感激不盡!!

    2011-08-13 15:48:18 補充:

     

     

     

    less than 400 words

    這句翻譯成中文,就是【400字以內】。

  • lobo
    Lv 5
    9 年前

    this is a book that telling stories of Greek mythology,there are many interesting roles and scenes in the book,

    2011-08-11 20:43:17 補充:

    本人文法不好無法解釋

    Some of the storiessay that the coexistence between people也許改some of the stories described the coexistence between people比較好

  • 9 年前

    還有lessthan 400 words

    是指要寫少於400字嗎?

    2011-08-10 08:57:23 補充:

    many exciting role

    many怎麼會加單數?

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