請問這句英文文法對嗎?還是有更好的?

Question

I trust time will prove all of your effort. That's important for you to do your best and be yourself

請幫我看看句子這樣對不對,,我不是要英翻中喔,,謝謝

原句意思
我相信時間會證明你的所有努力,開心做自己最重要.

Answer 1

版主已經寫得不錯。這裡是修辭上的斟酌。

我相信時間會證明你的所有努力,開心做自己最重要.

I believe that time will attest to your effort eventually.
Nothing is more important than being yourself and happy.

attest to 是你這句子適用的 "證明"；prove 不是這樣 - prove 是有證據去證明什麼，所以後面的名詞是"正面或反面確立的"。譬如，the button found in the crime scene proved his guilt 犯罪現場發現的鈕扣證明他有罪

effort 比較中性，避免和 prove 連用。
或者，可以考慮這樣 ...time will prove that your effort pays (in the long run).


2011-08-12 01:37:10 補充：
證明你的所有努力 = attest to _all_ your efforts

efforts 換成good work, hard work 也很口語化

2011-08-12 16:51:10 補充：
這句很好 -- The most important thing is to be yourself happily.

不要使用 oneself -- 因為第一句是 your effort. 最好前後一致都用 you 系列。

Answer 2

Allen
[ + 1 + A ]

Answer 3

Allen + 1 !

Good job !