小風 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

英文作文,請幫忙挑錯

英文作文,請幫忙挑錯,如果有更好的寫法或更高級的寫法也請幫忙指教~謝謝!

What makes a good teacher?I think that opinions of everybody are different,but my English teacher─Mrs.Chen is the model of good teacher certainly.Sometimes I close my eyes and my thoughts flash back to our first meeting.She was kind and affectionate,but very serious. During the English class I had been attending because she made grammar not only instructive but interesting.From then on,I have become very fond of English.Althought I graduated from senior high school this year,I am filled with nostalgia for her English class.In conclusion,I would like to thank her for all she has done for me.As her retirement is drawing near,I will never forget her and what she had said‘ The best part of learning English,however,is a secret that many people already know─it is a lot of fun!’

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Dear 意見者: Stanza ( 專家 1 級 )

那請問我要如何更改題目and內容呢?好像不能改了~教教我please!

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    有些地方是比較中文式英文的部分以及文法錯誤,稍微改成另一種表達模式!!希望有好一些~

    What makes a good teacher?I think that opinions differ from person to person. Nevertheless, my English teacher, Mrs.Chen, is the model of good teacher for me. Closing my eyes, now and then my memories will flash back to the first time we met each other. She was kind and affectionate, yet she could be serious sometimes. During her English class, I had been paying my attention to the lesson all along. She made grammars not only comprehensible but intriguing. From then on, I became very fond of English. Although I graduated from senior high school this year, I still miss her English class. In conclusion, I would like to thank her for all she has done for me. Despite her retirement drawing near, I will never forget her and what she had said,” The best part of learning English, however, is a secret that many people already know─It is a lot of fun!”

    2011-08-25 20:31:41 補充:

    我分出的第一段部分,基本來講,英文作文盡量不要出現太主觀的用句,因此將certainly改成for me(對我來說)~~

    參考資料: 我自己~
  • Stanza
    Lv 7
    9 年前

    「根據Yahoo!奇摩知識+的定義,此問題的標題可能『過於含糊籠統』。請於標題註明:【原文語言】、【譯文語言】、【內容綱要】,否則您本身可能必須承擔此問題事後被移除的風險。另外,翻譯文句超過5行(或100個中文字)視同違反版規,此類問題移除率很高,大多數的回答者是幾乎不會去看內容的。請參考:http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qi... 1611081205129」

  • 9 年前

    ㄜ...

    請問一下

    妳是在哪裡寫的???

    如果你有補習

    問一下就好了呀!

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