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匿名使用者 發問時間: 藝術與人文詩詞與文學 · 9 年前

英文作文(請幫我看看,自己寫的)

題目: The importance of English

以下是我的兩種寫法,大綱差不多:

(1):

We studyEnglsh at school every day.But do you know why we study it?In myopinion,English is one of the significant languages in the world now.It’swidely used in many different countries.Merchants use it to maketransactions,tourguides use it as a tool to earn money,and we learn it in orderto become more competitive.English doesn’t only have these few advantages.Thereare still some practical usages,reading books,seeing movies withouttranslations,listening to music,playing games,searching for information as wellas making friends,to name but a few.As theword “Earth villiage” comes out,it shows that the skill of communicating withforeigners is more important than before. Consequently,to study English wellought to be the enphasis of every student.

(2): English is a practical and internationallanguage . It is widely used in many countries . Here are my opinions about theimportance of English.Firstly,traveling to a foreign country isalways a dream for us.When traveling abroad,weare not able to speak local language.Thus we use the languagewhich is available all over the world. Secondly,such as listening tomusic,seeing movies as well as reading books are the recreation whatpeople do in their leisure time.Doing these sometimes requires anability to understand English . Furthermore,since the Network starts to bepopular,and many of the websites are written in English,consequently,Ifyou want to get plenty of useful information via thewebpages,you will find English is necessary.As the word “Earth villiage” comes out,itshows that it’s much easier to come intocontact with foreigners. Therefore,can communicate with people inEnglish is more significant than before.And students should put emphasis onstudying English well and can express properly in English.

請問哪種比較好

可以附上範文嗎?(不行也ok)

2 個解答

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    我比較喜歡第一篇

    不過第二篇的結構比較完整 老師會比較喜歡...

    裡面有些文法有點小錯誤

    參考資料: myself
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  • 9 年前

    使用more competitive怪怪的,這樣的意思是指使我們更加「好強、好競爭的」。

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