maggie 發問時間: 藝術與人文詩詞與文學 · 9 年前

英文書信問題...關於英文書信方面

各位英文好的大大:

我男朋友生日快到了,我想寫一封英文信給他,因這對我很重要所以我給20點...再麻煩大家幫我看一下,是否有需要再修改的地方嗎??

謝謝大家的熱心幫忙哦...

as below:

Dear toby:Another new year, your 31th birthday comes again.As we know, in the past of year, we had met several difficulties. You left Tainan ,and could not company with me here; Getting harder work in Taichung ,and always Concentrate your mind in the work. Sometimes,I even thought you forgot me.:)However,You always be optimistic and encourage me. I love this kinda of you,just like a little boy.you do everything with your whole mind. Not only on your job, but also on our relationship.Here comes your day ,and as I have been told you,I would love to celebrate every birthday with you in the rest of our life.No matter the future going to be, I will stand by you forever!Cause you love me ,and I love you as well.

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有其他口語或較貼近生活的用語嗎??

不喜歡太冗長的說法....

謝謝大家的幫忙哦~

:)

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dear Taco:

thanks for ur kindly assistacne...

it's very hopeful for me...

妳也是遠距離哦...很辛苦!

可是我們要對彼此有信心,加油哦!!

:)

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear Toby:

    Another new year is coming .Your 31th birthday is around the corner.

    As we know, in the past of this year, we had faced (encountered) several difficulties.

    (encounter 和 face 較有〝面對〞的感覺)

    You left Tainan ,and could not accompany me here;

    ( company是名詞 accompany才是動詞,

    vt. 及物動詞 陪同, 伴隨

    例句: He wished her to accompany him. 他希望她陪他。)

    I get a harder job in Taichung ,and you are always on my mind while

    working.

    (我的心總是圍繞在你身上~最口語的說法)

    Sometimes,I even think you have already forgotten me.:)

    However,You are always optimistic and encourage me a lot.

    I love the way you are , just like a little boy.

    (我喜歡這樣的你)

    you do everything with your whole mind.

    Not only on your job, but also on our relationship.

    Here comes your day ,and as I have told you,

    I would love to celebrate every birthday with you in the rest of our lives.

    No matter what the furture will be like , I will be with you forever!

    (我會永遠和你在一起~感覺更深刻吧:) )

    'Cause you love me , and I love you too.

    (因為你愛我,我也愛你 )

    ==============================

    有些句子我改的比較口語化,

    因為按照中文的想法去翻譯的話,

    反而讀起來不是那麼通順^^

    祝你們永遠甜甜蜜蜜~~加油:)

    參考資料: 也是遠距離戀愛的我 :)
  • 9 年前

    haha...thanks & i just try to do tell him my feeling...

    will not embarrassed by this way...

    :)

    how about other people think??

  • 9 年前

    Awesome, I hope more people can do like this!

    Try it by themselves then ask questions!

  • 您好,有關您提出的疑問,敝人僅答覆於下:

    較為不適切之處,用紅色粗體字表示,藍色部分表示略為更動,供您參考。(對於修正之處若有疑問,敬請再度提出。)

    Dear Toby: Another new year is here, with your 31st birthday around the corner. As we know, in the past few years, we had met several difficulties. You left Tainan, and could not company me(刪去with) here, got a harder job in Taichung, and are always concentrating your mind on the work. Sometimes, I even think you have forgotten me. :)However, you are always optimistic and encouraging toward me. I love this kind of you, just like a little boy. You do everything with your whole mind. Not only on your job, but also on our relationship.Here comes your day, and as I have been telling you, I would love to celebrate every birthday with you in the rest of our lives(其實用單數 life 也可以,有將您們兩位視為一體的感覺,不過用 lives 較符合文法。).No matter what our future will be like, I will stand beside(用stand by好像是【愛情中的奴隸】一般,不太好喔!) you forever!Cause you love me, and I love you just the same.

    圖片參考:http://imgcld.yimg.com/8/n/AB01999404/o/1011082807...

    希望我的回答有幫助到您,若有任何疑問歡迎再度提出,感激不盡。

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