? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

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Forty minutes passed. “How much of the presentation do you think I heard?” The answer was “None of them.”Why? Because I was thinking through my presentation and analyzed every aspectof it, I was trying to remember what I need to say. The closer my turn was, the more nervous I became. Finally, it came my turn to delivered, so I went up to the front of the classroom and started my first word of my presentation.

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    “How much of the presentation do you think I heard?” The answer was “None of them.”

    你要表達的應該是你認為我聽進去多少別人的報告?答案是沒有

    在英文裡,可能要用另一種說法,建議你改成直述句

    I couldn't focus on what they were presenting because I was preparing and orgnizing what am I going to say in my mind.

    The closer my turn was, the more nervous I became. Finally, it came my turn to delivered, so I went up to the front of the classroom and started my first word of my presentation.

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    I became more and more nervous when the time was approching. 當時間愈來愈逼近的時候,我也愈來愈緊張。

    Finally, I stood in front of the class and started to deliver my presentation.終於輸到我了,我站在全班面前開始了我的報告。

    參考資料: 自己
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    Lv 7
    9 年前

    Forty minutes passed. “How much of the presentation do you think I heard?” The answer was “None of them.”Why? Because I was thinking through my presentation and analyzed every aspectof it, I was trying to remember what I need to say. The closer my turn was, the more nervous I became. Finally, it came my turn to delivered, so I went up to the front of the classroom and started my first word of my presentation.

    紅字是錯誤的

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