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There are three children in my family,and I am the second child. My younger sister and I are twins. Most people choose Caesarean section for security reasons,but our mom believes that Normal Spontaneous Delivery is better for babys. It’s rare to twins.(這對雙胞胎來說很罕見) So there are more than ten interns in the delivery room to watch this special case. I came to this world fifteen minutes early than my sister. We both weigh 3000 grams then,that is,our mother had to sport more than 6 kilograms tummy during she was pregnant(我們的媽媽懷孕的時候要挺著超過六公斤的大肚子)We always play together,becauce we have the same interest. We are often asked with same questions. Such as ’’Do you have telepathy?’’ Sometimes we disguise that we have telepathy for fun. When we have the same hair cut, others will say ‘’Why don’t you have different haircut let others to make out you?’’But when we have different dress,they will say’’Why are you have different haircut? Twins should look the same.’’We also disguise each other to trick others beacause many people can’t make out us. Even we think that we are not alike. I think so all the time untill once. I saw my sister at the aisle in the store. When I smile and walking to her, I found that she also wave to me at the same time. I surprised found that in fact,that is a big mirrow at the other side. And I am waving to myself. Fortunately,no one saw this moment.Although we are not study in the same school now,the times that we be with each other are reduce a lot, but my emotions to her are not reduce. Have such a nice twin like her is my most lucky thing.

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Even most people believe that the twins are born by Caesarean section for safer reasons, our mom preferred the natural childbirth.

這裡我想說的是我們的媽媽相信自然產對寶寶比較好(也可以說寶寶會比較聰明),這樣子翻有這個意思嗎?

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  • cheng
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    9 年前
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    There are three children in my family, and I am the second child. My younger sister and I are twins. Even most people believe that the twins are born by Caesarean section for safer reasons, our mom preferred the natural childbirth. In consequence of her decision, there were more than ten interns in the operation room to watch this special case because it’s very rare to deliver twins by this means.I came to this world fifteen minutes earlier than my sister. We both weighed 3000 grams then. Thus, our mother had to exercise with more than 6 kilograms tummy during her pregnancy. We always play together, because we have the same interest. We are often asked with the same questions. Particularly, ’’Do you have telepathy?’’ Sometimes we disguise ourselves that we both have the ability of the telepathy for fun. In addition, when we have the same haircuts, others will say ‘’Why don’t you have different haircuts, so people can make out you?’’ But when we have different dresses, they will say ’’Why do you have different haircuts? Twins should look the same.’’We often disguise ourselves to trick people because they can hardly make out us. Even we are not alike, I always think myself that way all the time indeed. Once, I saw my sister standing at the aisle in the store. When I approached and waved her with smiles, she also waved me on the other side of the aisle at the same time. Suddenly, I noticed that, in fact, there was a big mirror at the other end. I was waving myself indeed. Fortunately, no one observed this moment.Although the times that we can stay with each other has been reduced quite a lot due to not attending to the same school now, my emotions to her are never lessened. Having such a nice twin sister like her is my luckiest thing.

    Hope this help!

    2011-10-27 08:01:51 補充:

    Please add few words:

    Even most people believe that the twins are born by Caesarean section for safer reasons, our mom preferred the natural childbirth and she believed that newborn babies would have more brains than anyone else.

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  • 9 年前

    What a brave soul your mom was. Who was the person said

    "Frailty, thy name is woman!"?

    Now, I want you to take it back!

    2011-10-24 04:48:54 補充:

    And eat the crow I found in the dump too.

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