減肥中 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

英文 賀年卡(20點)

In this special season, we would like tosend you this card and wish you all have a peaceful and wonderful happy newyear as well. All of our staffs would like to thank you for your fully supportand help during the past year and at the same time, we hope that you cancontinue to support us and we will definitely cooperate and serve you at ourbest in the coming new year! 以上為我主管貼給我,要我改的賀年卡內容,但因為我的文法實在很遜,可是月中就要寄出所有賀年卡去國外,所以請高手幫忙改一下內容,避免文法錯誤且寫的更好,20點奉上,拜託大家!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Lily
    Lv 5
    9 年前
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    英文 賀年卡 In this special season, we would like tosend you this card and wish you all have a peaceful and wonderful happy newyear as well. All of our staffs would like to thank you for your fully supportand help during the past year and at the same time, we hope that you cancontinue to support us and we will definitely cooperate and serve you at ourbest in the coming new year!

    閣下寫得很好耶 只需要一些修改In this special season, we would like to send you our wishes in this card . ~Have a peaceful and a very Happy New Year of 2012 !~

    On behalf of all the staffs, we would like to thank you for all of your supported during the past years and we believed your business is very important to us, we are looking forward to be better assist you in the coming year. Best wishes from xxx簡單明瞭感謝對方的長期合作即可

    2011-11-05 22:00:36 補充:

    Thank you very much, my dear DaSaGwa . :)

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  • 9 年前

    lily+1, very nicely written !

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