Miss M 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

請幫我檢查這段翻譯的英文段落 謝謝 很急迫

Excepting this, if the outward appearance can’t be defined, we will usually lay down it as Golden sample for definition. On the requirements for acceptance to 某某 Co., Ltd., the outward appearance is more important than the function. The function can be measured electrometrically with ease. But there is the wide divergence of cognition among our two parties. Anyways, it’s quite essential and undisputable for quality control since they have the pressure from their own responsibilities as well. Therefore, they must carry out the strict standard on the inspection for outward appearance. I think we should negotiate about this part successfully with them before the production. In the mean time, we will require a fairly high quality on our products beyond doubt.

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  • PONY
    Lv 7
    8 年前
    最佳解答

    Excepting this, if the outward appearance can’t be defined, we will usually lay down it as Golden sample for definition.

    這句開頭的Excepting this,用得很不像英文;因不知版大用意何在,如不損原意,能不用就不用。

    國貿實務裏有prototype sample, counter sample 等,但還沒聽過Golden sample。

    還有談到「樣品」,會涉及「規格」specification,但也沒聽過是definition.

    On the requirements for acceptance to 某某 Co., Ltd., the outward appearance is more important than the function.

    According to the requirements specified (required) by xxx Co., Ltd., …根據某某公司所指定(規定)的要求

    The function can be measured electrometrically with ease. But there is a wide divergence of opinion between us and xxxxx. (意見的分歧;兩者之間的介係詞要用between)

    Anyway, (Anyway自尾沒有s;拼字錯誤) it’s quite essential and undisputable for quality control since they also shoulder the responsibility to ensure the quality of their products.

    Therefore, they must comply with (adhere to) the strict standard (遵照標準) on the inspection for outward appearance.

    I think we should make them aware of what we’d like them to cope with before the production. (應讓他們知道在他們生產大貨前我們要他們配合的事項)

    In the mean time, we will require a fairly high quality on our products beyond doubt. (個人以為最後這句大可刪去,因為有些多餘)~

  • ?
    Lv 6
    8 年前

    Besides this, if the ourward/appearance can not be

    defined, we will usually lay down (制定) a golden

    sample for the proper definition.

    The outward/appearance is more important than the

    function. It is acceptable to XXX Co., Ltd. The function

    can be measured electronically and easily. However,

    there is a wide divergence of coginition between our two

    parties. Anyway, quality control is quite essential and

    undisputable/It is quite essential and undisputable in

    quality control. Althought they are faced with a lot of

    pressures from their own responsibilities, they must

    comply with the strict inspection on the outward/

    appearance . I think we should successfully negotiate the

    above matter with them before the production, In the

    mean time, we will require a fairly high quality on our

    products beyond doubt.

    2011-11-14 20:37:07 補充:

    1st sentence : ourward ------> outward

    2011-11-14 20:39:54 補充:

    ... the strict inspection ----> the strict inspection standard

  • 阿昌
    Lv 7
    8 年前

    electrometrically

    只有這個字要改正

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