小酷 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

英文作文文法和修改(((急急急急

請各位大大,幫我解決問題

我自己寫了一篇英文文章,我不知道對不對

幫我檢查文法,和改一改讓句子更通順,更好

拜託了,,很急!!!!!!

Gain And Loss What is life? I’ll always ask myselfthis question. Until now, I still can’t find the right answer for it. But I’mgoing to tell you what I think about life. This is what, when you win some, andthen you will lose some. You can never gain something without losing. If thisworld does not have any losing, then we won’t know what is “treasure”. Lovemake you happy, but also make you feel painful. Rich let us enjoy, but alsomake us feel worry. Same as success. If you expect something, and it’s happen,that’s a kind of happiness. However, when you lose, you will feel verydisappoint. Maybethe first you get, the first it lose. The last thing you get, the last time youlose. So, if you don’t get, then you will not lose anything. It’s the same,therefore life is really don’t have to haggle too much. Do not bother to fussy,just to feel and learn from real life.

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  • 8 年前
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    What is life? I’ll always ask myself this question. Until now, I still can’t find the right answer for it. But I’m going to tell you what do I think about life. This is what do you win is equal to what do you lose. You can never gain something without losing. If this world does not have any losing, then we might don't know what is “treasure”. Love make you happy, but also make you feel painful. We enjoy rich, but also make us feel worry. Same as success, if you expect something, and it’s happen,that’s a kind of happiness. However, when you lose, you will feel very disappoint. Maybe the first you get, the first it lose. The last thing you get, the last time you lose. So, if you don’t get, then you will not lose anything. It’s the same,therefore life is really don’t have to haggle too much. Do not bother to fussy, just to feel and learn from real life.

    參考資料: correct by my self.
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