- DaSaGwaLv 78 年前最佳解答
Sun slowly rising from the east, I say to the Sun: please use your sunlight to melt the loneliness and the salitude that are at my side. Sun replies: Sorry, I cannot melt them, my rising up is to let you feel that there is warmth at every corner of the world.
A breeze blowing by, I say to the breeze: please take away the loneliness and the salitude that are at my side. Breeze replies, I cannot take them away, my blowing by is to let you feel a faint trace of cool feeling.
1. If you don't like to repeat the "feel" as in "feeling", you can replace "a faint
trace of cool feeling" with "a hint of coolness".
2. "by my side" can be replaced with "around me".
3. "sunlgiht" can be replaced with "sun ray"
4. "blow by" can be replaced with "blow over".參考資料： self