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After talking to you on the phone, I just cried, loudly.

For all these years, i was always thinking my mom's an obstructor of my life.

but right now, I realize that I'm the one who's been that.

I just feel totally messed up.

For every thing that a mother should do that you've done for me keeps hurting my heart, because this is the first time I feel that I'm not good enough to be your son.

The things you did just makes me ashamed.

I'm sorry, mom.I'm really sorry, so just don't worry about me.

I would try my best to be the good boy you've always thought about from now on.

I won't do any thing that makes you and dad distressed at all,

so please just don't be sad anymore.

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  • 8 年前
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    After talking with you over the phone, I just cried and cried loudly.

    For all these years, I always think my mom is an obstructor of my life. Right now, I realize that I'm the one.

    I just feel totally messed up. Every thing a mother would do, you have done them all for me. My heart feels ashamed, because I have never actually realized that until now. This is the first time I have ever felt that I'm not good enough for being your son.

    I'm sorry, mom. I'm really sorry, Don't worry about me. I would try my best to be the good boy you've always wanted me. From now on. I won't do any thing that would make you and dad distressed and disappointed at all. Please just don't feel sad anymore.

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    "For every thing that a mother should do that you've done for me keeps hurting my heart, because this is the first time I feel that I'm not good enough to be your son. The things you did just makes me ashamed. " The above paragraph is kind of illogical, based upon its English statement. However, I think, I understand what you mean, so I rearrange it as above. Hopefully, I didn't misunderstand your original meaning. If I did, I am sorry for my bad deed. Please inform me, I will remove my answer to pay for my responsibility.

    2.

    I assume that when you talked with your mom, it was NOT just you talked and she listened. It was a TWO-WAY conversation, so I change "to" to "with".

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  • 8 年前

    After talking to you on the phone, I just cried, loudly.

    For all these years, I was always thinking about my mom as an obstructor of my life. But right now, I realize that I'm the one who's been that way.

    I just feel totally messed up. For every thing that a mother should do that you've done for me keeps hurting my heart, because this is the first time I feel that I'm not good enough to be your son. The things you did just makes me ashamed. I'm sorry, mom.I'm really sorry, so just don't worry about me.

    I will try my best to be the good boy you've always thought about from now on. I won't do any thing that makes you and dad distressed at all,

    so please just don't be sad anymore.

    我用藍色的部份就是更改的,希望對你有幫助

  • 8 年前

    Calm down, Master Prisoner, don’t get all fired up by parental failures. Many parents are indeed messed up; otherwise I won’t even have a full time job.

  • 8 年前

    Dude, you really messed up. In my opinion, English is less a problem than the evasiveness of the message. Grow up, stand up, and tell her who you are and what you want. Point out the mismatches of her expectations.

    There is nothing wrong for little mermaid wishing for a pair of legs.

    2011-12-16 04:43:28 補充:

    Ignorance and arrogance do not go away with aging and they are typically worse on tiger parents. I wouldn't blame everything on them for parenting is part of life-long learning process as well.

    As I had argued with Master Priest - parents are no better than us in some decision making processes.

    2011-12-16 06:47:27 補充:

    I don't think it is parental failure at all. A good % of all parents are just like that. they are still much better than pedophiles and drunken sailors. What we need in this dude's case is good communication and compromises. With these, little mermaids and mermen shall all prevail.

    2011-12-16 21:46:01 補充:

    Also, I think compromises are hard to come by with Asian parents, especially tiger parents. They strongly and falsely (in many cases) believe that their decision making capabilities are better than their children.

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    2011-12-16 21:47:32 補充:

    Right or wrong, my biggest problem with this, is that these parents failed to understand it is the life of another individual, although their child, they are playing with, not just an achievement they can show off to their freinds and relatives.

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