? 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

十萬火急!english poem 20點!!!!!!!!

急求english poem(小六程度.要rhyme)

題目:school/my favourite holiday

(at least 20 sentences.)

thx!

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  • aShlEy
    Lv 7
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    你有冇寫錯?小學寫詩頂多1段(stanza)4行(lines),而唔係計句,但當你1行1句,都寫唔到20句咁多!你老師係咪癲喪?詩不嬲唔計字數,計韻,可以意思唔清,但一定要讀落好聽.我都想作,但太長,首先呢度一定要答幾次...

    2012-01-01 11:46:26 補充:

    My favourite holiday is Chinese year

    We can make the year monster fear

    By red firecrakers that explode and tear

    But all children shut their ears

    They never admit they fear

    We receive red packets

    Parents put in their pockets,

    Just like pick-pockets

    When we want to buy a rocket

    Nothing will be left.

    We finish our homwork

    But others lurk

    And watch fireworks

    Fireworks are the explosion work

    that many mothers stop their housework

    We hang out together

    With my mother and father

    And sister and brother

    Greet relative, friends and neighbour

    Saying friendship forever

  • 9 年前

    24 sentences,OK?

    2011-12-31 19:25:37 補充:

    Christmas is my favourite time of year.

    Happiness is the meaning of the holiday season.

    Relatives come from near and far.

    Icicles make the world glisten and shine.

    Snow is falling softly.

    2011-12-31 19:25:54 補充:

    The tree is decorated with sparkling lights.

    Mom is in the kitchen baking cookies

    And I am waiting for

    Santa to arrive.

    2011-12-31 19:26:08 補充:

    Christ was born on Christmas Day.

    Holidays are special.

    Reindeer tow Santa's sled.

    Icicles hang off my roof.

    Snow comes in December.

    Trees are decorated in our homes for Christmas

    2011-12-31 19:26:22 補充:

    Mummers go door to door singing Christmas carols.

    Angels are in the Christmas play.

    Santa drinks a lot of fanta.

    2011-12-31 19:26:35 補充:

    Celebrating has begun.

    Ho ho ho, Santa is singing aloud.

    Reindeer in running too fast.

    Is rosy Santa frost-bitten or just exhausted?

    Something must be wrong with him.

    Too much Union Beer, I guess.

    2011-12-31 19:26:50 補充:

    Mornings, remember, always bring hangover

    And never-ending headaches!

    Santa, Santa next time you should drink Fanta!

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