ken 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

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1.The turnover on the first season in this year is the double of the same season in last year.

2.Our salary is increaced 150 percentage to compare with ten years ago.

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  • PONY
    Lv 7
    9 年前
    最佳解答

    1. The turnover on the first season in this year is the double of the same season in last year.

    建議改為:The turnover for the first season this year doubles that of the same period last year. 說明:a. 介係詞on,請改用forb. this year 即可,它之前可不需再加介係詞;若有明確的年份才是用:in 19xx 或in the year of 19xxc. last year即可,它之前可不需再加介係詞d. 改用the same period (同期)會好過the same season,以免重複使用season 2. Our salary is increaced 150 percentage to compare with ten years ago.

    建議改為:

    若是指指「增加成為十年前的150%」: Our salary is increased to 150 percent, compared to that of ten years ago. 或Our salary is increased to 150 percent, compared with that of 19xx.

    若是「比十年前增加150%」:

    Our salary is increased by 150 percent, compared to that of ten years ago. 或Our salary is increased by 150 percent, compared with that of 19xx.或Our salary is increased by 150 percent in comparison to that of ten years ago. 說明:a. increased 才是正確的拼字b. 增加成為多少個「百分比」的百分比,請用percentc. 和甚麼相比較,慣用語為compared to 或compared with 或 in comparison to (依句構不同如上述)

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    6 年前

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  • 9 年前

    The turnover for the first season this year doubles that of the same time last year.

    Our pay increases by 150% in comparison to that of 10 years ago.

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