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發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

幫我看一下我的英文文法是否有錯

Oh Summer day

Oh Raining Day

Oh I forgot my yellow umbrella in the train Do you see my umberlla

It's alon stay somewhere

Oh Summer day

Oh Raining Day

Oh I need my yellow Unbrella on the bad dayIf you see my umberlla

Can you take it back to me

I went my umbrella come to backOh Summer day

Oh Raining Day

I loset my yellow Unbrella

It's alone stay somewhere

And I stay here alone alone alone

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    Oh a summer day

    Oh a raining day

    Oh I left my yellow umbrella on the train Did you see my umberlla

    It's all along sitting somewhereOh the summer day

    Oh the raining day

    Oh I need my yellow unbrella on the bad dayIf you see my umbrella

    Could you please bring it back

    I want my umbrella so very badOh that summer day

    Oh that raining day

    I lost my yellow unbrella on that day

    It's all alone crying somewhere

    I'm all alone calling over here

    (Sorry to hear about that. Hope it's finally back!)

    2012-01-18 14:59:34 補充:

    Sorry, "along" in line 5 should be "alone".

  • ?
    Lv 6
    9 年前

    in the train - on the train

    alon - alone

    I went my umbrella come to back - I want my umbrella to come back

    I loset my yellow Unbrella - i lost my yellow umbrella

    It's alone stay somewhere - It's alone staying somewhere

    And I stay here alone alone alone - And i am here all alone alone alone

    umbrella - this is the correct spelling

  • 阿昌
    Lv 7
    9 年前

    umberlla要改成umbrella傘

    Unbrella要改成Umbrella傘

    loset要改成loser失敗者

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