小蛙 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

有誰能幫我校正檢查一下文法和文義?

請各位聰明的大大幫幫我吧!!

若有更好的句子或用詞也請不吝提供建議我:)

感激不盡~

This was really a relax vacation of Chinese New Year. I just read novels, ate, slept and played computer. I didn’t know what else things I could do. Reading novels is never boring to me. I read nine novels during Chinese New Year holiday. Some novels’ writers are great, amazing and famous. Their composition always fascinated me. Sometimes you lent their composition hard. I also ate a lot during vacation. I think I will gain weight and become a fat girl, so I got up at 6:30 every day. I jogged in the park near my house with my friend. But I was still scare of standing on the scale. That’s really terrible. Almost time of new year vacation, I wasn’t sleepy at all. I didn’t sleep enough five hours in several days. My mom said that too crazy and called me “crazy girl”. That’s right. And I talked with English to my friend in Facebook. Her grammar is wrong and fearful. And then she told me “The Google translation is shit!” Because she used the Google translation to translate Chinese and talked to me. Talking to her was really tired. Those things were full of my New Year vacation. It’s a wonderful vacation.

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    To me the Chinese New Year was really a relaxing vacation. What I did all the time were reading novels, eating, sleeping and playing computer games. I even had no idea what else I could do. Reading novels is never boring to me. I read nine novels in the holidays. Some of the authors are great, amazing and famous. Their composition always fascinated me. Sometimes it's difficult to borrow their works from the library. In addition, I ate quite a lot during the vacation. I think I will gain weight and become a fat girl, so I got up at 6:30 every day, jogging in the park near my house with my friend. But I am still scared every time when I stand on the scale. That’s really terrible. Because I was too excited and did what I love all the time, I seldom felt sleepy. I slept less than five hours those days. My mom said that was too crazy and called me a “crazy girl”. That’s true. What's more, I talked in English with my friend on Facebook. She made many mistakes in grammar. To my surprise, she told me “The Google translation is *****!” Because she used the Google translation to talk to me. Talking to her was really tiring. Those interesting things filled my Chinese New Year, and it’s really a wonderful vacation.

  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

    我一直都有過敏狀況,是最近才知道要用防螨寢具的,因為醫師建議我用,我也考慮了很久,想說要買就買最好的,上個月趁網站有折扣的時候買了一組【北之特】防蹣(螨)寢具來用用看,真沒想到~~現在覺得過敏狀況有改善多了。雖然比一般的貴一些,不過~真值得!

  • 9 年前

    To # 4 , is any Taiwanese bothering you? Chinese New Year 的意思指的是全世界的華人,在過農曆年也就是春節期間所做的一切習俗;如除夕圍爐守歲、初一拜年、初二回娘家、初四接神、初五開市、初九天公生... 十五元宵,還有過年包紅包的習慣... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_New_Year

    2012-02-05 17:48:39 補充:

    每個民族過農曆年的習俗和方式不同,故把每個民族如何過農曆年的習慣興風情,分類為XXX New Year。試問韓國和日本有這樣過農曆年的嗎?

    請參考http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lunar_New_Year_(disam... 並請你好好尊重台灣人!!!

    2012-02-05 17:49:11 補充:

    To #4 , Each culture has" their own way and tradition of celebrating Lunar New Year ", so we called it XXX New Year. So don't get us wrong, OK !!! And be kind and respectul to other nation's culture!

  • 匿名使用者
    9 年前

    Actually, it's Lunar New Year. A lot of Asain countries have it. Lunar calander was not invented by Chinese. How people can say it's Chinese new year? In Korea, they say it's Lunar New Year.

    Anyway, it doesn't matter in here, becasue a lof ot Taiwanese have been brainwashed and think they are Chinese. There is no doubt that millions and millions Chinese refugees have pretended they are Taiwanese. And brainwashed Taiwanese think they are Chinese. Haha...It's kind of funny and stupid.

    All native Taiwanese should be Japanese.

    By the way, the native Taiwanese don't need Chinese New Year. This culture brought to here in six decades ago. Before that, they had it in different way.

    Poor native Taiwanese don't know their civilization has got at least 20,000 years. The Chinese civilization has only got 5,000 years.

    Even though they know they have 400 years history, but they don't know the contents. All they know, is lies and nothing. Poor! Silly! Stupid!

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  • 阿昌
    Lv 7
    9 年前

    This is real Chinese New Year holiday to relax. I just read novels, eat, sleep, and play computer. I do not know what else I can do. I never read the novel boring. Chinese Lunar New Year holiday period, I saw nine novels. Some of the novel "A writer is great, amazing and famous and they are always fascinated me the composition, sometimes you lend them the composition of the hard. Leave, I eat a lot and I think my weight will be increase, and become a fat girl, so every day I 6:30 I park near my house jogging, my friend, but I still stand scale scare. it's really terrible, almost New Year's holiday time, I not sleepy, I sleep less than 5 hours a few days. my mother said, crazy, call me "crazy girl." this is correct. and I talked my friend on Facebook, in English and her grammar is wrong , terrible and then she told me: "Google translation is *****!" because she translated with Google translator and I spoke Chinese, she is too tired to speak. those are my New Year holiday, which is a wonderful holiday.

  • ?
    Lv 6
    9 年前

    It was a very relaxing Chinese New Year holiday. I just readnovels, ate, slept and played computer. I didn’t know what else I could do. Inever find reading novels boring. In fact, I finished reading 9 novels duringthe holiday. Some authors are great and famous. Their works always fascinateme. I also ate a lot. I am so afraid that I will gain weight and become fat. Sonow every morning, I got up at 6:30am and jog in the park near my house alongwith my friend. Still, I am rather terrified every time I stand on a scale. During the Chinese New Year holiday, I wasn’t sleepy at all.I slept less than five hours within that several days. My mom said that thiswas madness and called me “crazy girl”. I talked in English with my friend inFacebook. Her grammar was rather weak and had many mistakes. Then she told methat “The Google translation is *****!” because she used it to translate to Chineseand talked to me. Talking to her was really tiring. Those were the things that occupymy Chinese New Year holiday. I had a wonderful time. Sometimes you lenttheir composition hard. – Don’t understand ???

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