Chunhui 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

英文高手請協助確認文法及字意

in order to develop the market for the new product launched of CB and increase sales momentum, marketing department plans a “ CB product promotion activity” which including the lucky draw activity, reselling event and free gift voucher to provide customers the incentives to increase policy volume. The implementation period is from 2012/2/3 to 2012/05/31. it will be increase the amount of advertisements (DM, eDM, Banner) to get known towards the customers for the duration of the campaign.

The planning of activities:

1. lucky draw event

Customer can get a raffle ticket if the premium is higher than NT$300 (inclusive). The higher premium will get more raffle ticket.2. reselling event

There is only 1% of customer who currently holding two (or more) policies. In order to encourage the salesman operation their existing customers, the old customer can get re-purchase gifts -NT$30 Watsons coupon if they purchase the CB product with unlimited premium.3. Free Gift Voucher

In order to increase the amount of premium, customers could redeem NT$50 Watsons coupon with NT$6000 and above premium purchase.

The cost of activity is NT$1111, and the activity costs accounted for the proportion of FYP premium is 1.64%.

已更新項目:

想要表達的意思大概如以下:

為了配合cb新商品上市,市場部門舉辦一場cb商品上市活動,活動內容包含抽獎活動,舊保戶活動及門檻禮活動。並希望能透過本活動達到銷售業績增加的目的。

活動期間為xx日至xx日,為了讓更多客戶了解相關訊息,我們將透過各頻道進行宣傳。

抽獎活動

只要保戶買超過xx就能得到抽獎券,買的越多,送的越多

舊客戶活動

目前只有x%的保戶持有2張以上的保單,為了讓業務員能成功再銷售,只要舊保戶買cb商品,不限金額就能獲得w禮券x元

門檻禮活動

為了提昇保費收入,只要客戶買x元以上,就能得到w禮券x元。

本次活動成本是x元,占總收入fyp的比例為x%

2 個已更新項目:

另外,想要了解

1、activity和event可以共用嗎?這二個字最大的差別在哪裡

2、抽獎建議用lucky draw 還是lottery

謝謝

2 個解答

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    8 年前
    最佳解答

    To promote the new product launch of CB, the marketing department will organize a “CB New Product Promotion”. The 2 key objectives are - to increase awareness of the new product & to increase market share and sales volume.The activities include: 1. lucky draw event

    Customer will get 1 raffle ticket if their premium amount is higher than NT$300 (inclusive). The higher their premium, the more raffle tickets they can get.2. reselling event

    There is only 1% of the customers who hold two (or more) policies currently. To increase more sales, all existing customers will receive a Watson gift voucher of NT$30 when they purchase CB product of any premum value.

    3. Free Gift Voucher

    To achieve higher premium revenue, customers will be entitled a NT$50 Watsons gift voucher when they purchase product of above xxx amount, .

    The cost of promotion is NT$1111 and it's 1.64% OF FYP.

    The implementation period is from 2012/2/3 to 2012/05/31.

    To create more publicity of this promotion, there will be advertisements such as DM and eDM Banner to inform the customers.

    activity和event可以共用 - activity, is more commonly used in commercial world

    抽獎建議用lucky draw - lucky draw is more commonly used in commercial world

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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    8 年前

    為了配合cb新商品上市,市場部門舉辦一場cb商品上市活動,活動內容包含抽獎活動,舊保戶活動及門檻禮活動。並希望能透過本活動達到銷售業績增加的目的。

    for promoting new CB ,our marketing department holds a “ CB products promotion activity”including lottery drawing, activity for origin and new customers. we hope to increase sales amount through this event.

    活動期間為xx日至xx日,為了讓更多客戶了解相關訊息,我們將透過各頻道進行宣傳。

    This event will be held from 2012/2/3 to 2012/05/31.for providing more information,we will advertise our products through different channels to customers.

    抽獎活動

    lottery drawing

    只要保戶買超過xx就能得到抽獎券,買的越多,送的越多

    Customer can get a lottery if he buys products more than NT$300 (inclued).

    the more you buy , the more lotterys you will get.

    舊客戶活動

    activity for origin customers

    目前只有x%的保戶持有2張以上的保單,為了讓業務員能成功再銷售,只要舊保戶買cb商品,不限金額就能獲得w禮券x元

    There is only 1% of customers who owns two or more insurance policies by now. for promoting sales amount for our salesman , the origin customer can get coupon(NT$XX) no matter how many products he buys.

    門檻禮活動

    activity for new customers

    為了提昇保費收入,只要客戶買x元以上,就能得到w禮券x元。

    for increasing sales amount,if customer buys products more than NT$XX,He can get coupon(NT$XX)

    本次活動成本是x元,占總收入fyp的比例為x%

    the total cost of this event is NT$XX ,which posseses x% of the total fyp.

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