我寫了篇英文自傳 工作用的 哪位高手能幫我改看看

My name is ppason Lin, I was born in Taichung on March 12th, 1985. My childhood live in Taichung and learning is also here. I grow up in a family with the parents and two younger sister. My father is a cell base station Technician and my mother is a Public Telephone Service provider. My parents always wish I could study hard and can take care of my sisters carefully.Since I am the eldest child, it makes me an independent, responsible and mature person.We always have a very safe and happy.

In my free time, I usually like to use the computer to do own thing. Take myself as an example, I keep in touch with my friends through Face Book's messages, I send my greetings through e-cards, I buy entity's books from e-bookstores, I shop from many websites and I search information from the searching engine. The other way to release stress is watching amusing programs and movies making me burst into laughter or tears heartily, or sharing what I think with friends.

I do my best to get good grades, but the grade of college entrance exam is not sarisfactory. I'll decide to persevere and finish my studies to the development of a diversified. I choose to major in computer science to enhance my computer skills and knowledge and learn how to design programs that will bring people efficiency and convenience in life.I can write some vb, C + +, and flash programming language .. and so on. In addition, I can make the creation of a database link and maintain. Otherwise I was a member of the Advocating Moral Youth Services Club and the Sign Language Club In my University Days. I like to interact with people,therefore participate in camp activities.Everytime let we are very tired and excited before the end of the activity .we grudge to separate each other.

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Now I still worked on solar technician in Taoyuan. Its name is Topcell Solar International Co.,Ltd. Six months ago I do not understand anything.Form the most basic out of the accounts, etching the film to clear the impurities, the screen printing grid, control parameters, fine-tuning parameters,

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Troubleshooting on machine...etc. I'll take a significant exten in the areas of work.I learned not only technical, but also learning to unity. It is not completed alone. I remembered then,Silver plastic plus enough to wipe a few pieces of wafer, and then I have to add material,

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but also care of print quality, is really a test of patience. Fortunately, I became familiar with these skills.

補充到上面為第四段

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As to my personality, I am creative, optimistic, friendly, willing to help others and down to earth. I am happy to fit in the company's policy and do my best. I got passion and expectation to myself and wish you would give me an opportunity to make me join you.

最後一段補充完畢 我英文用法都忘了大半 希望高手幫我看看 感恩

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    你可以去看看下面那個部落格,它裡面有滿多英文翻譯和自傳和中英履歷相關的範例&文章,你也可以在上面發問或留言!

    滿多需要英文求職信件和履歷表的人在那邊討論的你可以去看看

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007/

    參考資料: 很實用的求職翻譯部落格
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  • 匿名使用者
    9 年前

    你的自傳為你肩負著開啟面試機會的重責大任,它是否準備充分了呢?

    於排版上、字句的使用、自傳結構、呈現出來的個人特質等等層面,

    是不是能夠讓面試官感受到你的積極以及與眾不同之處呢?

    讓我們來為你完成它吧!請參考http://easydonetoday.zxq.net/person.html

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  • 這個英文網站你看看有沒有幫到ㄌ

    http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiY...

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