短短的兩篇文章~請大大幫忙修改!!!thank you 1. I am very exciting, because I got a job offer. This job is very satisfy for me. I hope I can do very well and get alone very well with my colleague in the future. Next Monday is my first work day. I trust myself who can do that. 2. My family and I go to the temple to pray for health and my job. I hope I can better than now. Today is also I take my brother back home from school last time, because I need to go to work next Monday. However, my mom will take he to school, so I think that’s fne.
- DaSaGwaLv 79 年前最佳解答
1. I am very exciting, because I get a job offer. This job is very satisfied (satisfactory) for me. I hope I can do very well and get alone very well nicely with my colleague in the future. Next Monday is my first day of work. I have the confidence that I can do it. 2.My family and I went to the temple to pray for health and my job. I hope I can be (do) better than now. Today, it is also the last time I take my brother home back home from school, due to my starting working on next Monday. However, my mom will take him to school, so I think that’s (just) fine.
I change "got a job..." to "get a job ...", because you shall be exciting at the same time when you get the job, not after a while.
I also replace very well with "very nicely" to avoid repeating.
I change "go to temple" to "went to temple", because I think you went to temple at an earlier time, according to the context. If it is at the time, then you can change it back to "go".
I tried to stay as close to your original meaning in my modification.
2012-02-19 02:53:22 補充：
Master 26535 is RIGHT! It is better to use "excited" not "exciting" Her example sentence is good to help you to understand when to use "excited" or "exciting".
2012-02-19 02:57:36 補充：
The key point is where the excitement comes from?
From within oneself or itself, use "exciting" for example: This is an exciting book.
Caused by someone or something, use "excited", in your writing, your excitement is caused by being offered a job, so you use "excited".
2012-02-19 11:06:35 補充：
I just BORROW your saying to make my answer BETTER. Thank you, hopefully, you don't mind. Next time I will ask for permission!
2012-02-19 12:27:41 補充：
Master 26535, with your help, poster is happy with my answer ! Thank you!參考資料： self
- Dark HelmetLv 79 年前
"excited" is not the better choice; it's the only choice.
Inmate26535's help didn't improve the answer; it corrected it.
- 9 年前
I am very excited because I just got a job offer. This job is very satisfactory for me. I hope I can do it very well and get alone nicely with my colleagues in the future. Next Monday will be my first day of work, and I have the confidence that I can do it.
My whole family went to a temple to pray for my health and job. I hope I can be better. Today is also the last day I will take my brother home from school due to my work next Monday. After that, my mom will take him to school, and I think that will be fine.
- prisoner26535Lv 79 年前
S12 must be a new model to be exciting. I would rather being excited than being exciting to get a job offer.
When I was T-1000 model, very exciting indeed, John Connor and Arnold were very excited to see me. However, John picked S12 for it was more exciting.
Yes, I got TERMINATED indeed!
2012-02-19 06:25:33 補充：
Wwwwwwhat? I was telling my sad story of losing the exciting job to S12. Why does the melon dude use my name in his answer?
2012-02-19 07:47:50 補充：
This job is very satisfy for me.
This statement has 2 problems:
1. "satisfying" is to be used instead.
2. how does it satisfy you provided that you have not started the job?
Of course, I think you chose a wrong word; otherwise, it is way over the top.
2012-02-19 07:52:27 補充：
What would I use? I would say:
This job looks very promising to me.
This will be a challenging job to me.
This is a desirable job to me.
This company is a very prestige one to me.
My father owns this company...