宏維 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 9 年前

誰能幫我看一下文法哪裡有錯?

Igrew up is a dream, that dream is not small, but for me was a big dream, tocomplete the dream of single difficulties, on the way will meet small setbacks,I have to be completed that dream, that dream is that I dream of becoming adoctor, although the path difficult, but can we learn the setbacks, becoming amedical smart doctors, which is a great challenges also. Why should I choose tobe doctors? I liked to want to poor countries practice, however, I choose whendoctors dream, it is my I grew up to now's dream, in order to achieve it, Imust now take a good reading, and to do the biggest dream, I must now takepragmatic himself and let it could for the next to setbacks, and the standardsfor it to make himself for the next the success of the standards for their ownproud.我從小就有一個夢想,那個夢想不大也不小,但是對我來說是很大的夢想,要完成那一個夢想相單困難,在途中也會遇到小小的挫折,無論如何我都要完成那個夢想,那個夢想是,我夢想成為一位醫生,雖然路途艱苦,但是能在挫折中學習,成為一位醫術高明的醫生,這還真是一大挑戰。為什麼我要選擇當醫生?因為我從小就想要到貧困的國家行醫,然而我才選擇夢想當醫生,這就是我我從小到現在的夢想,為了實現它,我必須在現在好好的讀書,為了完成我最大的夢想,我必須在現在好好踏實自己,讓自己能為下一次得挫折,而準備解決它,讓自己為下一次的成功,而準備為自己感到驕傲。

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  • 9 年前
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    I have a dream when I was a child. For some people, though the dream is neither big nor small; it is the biggest one in my heart. Tocomplete the dream may meet some slight trouble, butno matter what will happen to me, I will achieve my goal and learn fromthem. The dream is that I want to be a doctor. Inspire it is a long way, to learn is to become what I want to be. It is also a great challenge. Even so, why I choose to be a doctor is for the simple reason that I want to go abroad to the poor countries to help the poor to live better. Now,what I want to do is to study hard for preparing to complete mygreat dream and be firmly anchored in reality, facing the next difficult to approach the tricky situation. I am proud of myself for thisgreat decision and looking forward to it to be a success.

    2012-02-28 12:11:04 補充:

    中英文很難從字面相對應的翻譯,希望這樣的改寫你會喜歡。本人覺得這樣寫會比較平順。

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