英文信校正

Dear XXXX:

I'm one of your fans in Taiwan.

The first time I saw you was in XXX.

The next time,I saw your works,which was XXX.

XXX played by you was different from that I had known from the novels.

He was more vivid and no longer just seemed like the recorder.

In this version,he was like a leading role and could control the plot.

It made this TV series more attractive.

I thonght your excellent performance was one of the decisive factor to creat this special XXX.

After enjoying the amazing XXX,I look forward to your next works,XXX.

I am sure that it'll be awesome.

Hope you won't mind my poor English.

I do not think my English teacher will be willing to correct this letter for me,especially,when he finds I ignore the composition,he assigned as a homework.

He might not think I am "practicing".

I hope you will be very happy and act the best as always. I'll be a faithful fan to support you as always.

I've enclosed an envelope and a photo of you. Would you please write your autograph on the photo?

Best wishes from Taiwan,

第一次寫信給明星,請幫忙校正!!感謝

P.S.對方是英國人,如果可以請用英式英文校正

已更新項目:

If XXXX had already left New Zealand,please send the letter back to me by using the stamped addressed envelope I gave to let me know it.

還有這段

2 個已更新項目:

「He might not think I am practical.」

請問Lucy是想表達什麼呢??

這句我看的不是很懂,

我的原句「He might not think I am "practicing".」

是指我的老師可能不會認為我在寫這封英文信算是一種英文寫作的練習

但「practical」的意思不是實用的、實踐的、實際的??

另外這句為什麼用現在完成式??

「He has made this TV series more attractive.」

也謝謝你的校正,其他部分都很完美,謝謝~~

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear XXXX:

    I'm one of your fans in Taiwan. The first time I saw you was in XXX. The second time I saw you was in XXX.

    XXX played by you was different from that I read in the novel. He was more vivid and no longer seemed like the recorder. In this version, he was like a leading role and could control the plot. He has made this TV series more attractive. I think your excellent performance was one of the decisive factor to creat this special XXX.

    Having enjoying watching the amazing XXX, I look forward to your next works,XXX. I am sure it'll be awesome.

    Hope you won't mind my poor English. I do not think my English teacher will be willing to correct this letter for me, especially when he finds that I ignore the composition asignment which he gave. He might not think I am practical.

    I hope you will always be happy and perform the best as you always did. I'll be a faithful fan to support you as always.

    Enclosed please find an envelope and a photo of you. Would you please be kind enough to sign your name on the photo and send it back to me?

    With my best wishes,

    If XXXX has already left New Zealand, please send back the letter to me by using the enclosed envelope. Thank you for your kind help.

    2012-03-11 01:07:47 補充:

    關於「He might not think I am not practicing.」很抱歉我誤會你的原意。但是,如果你想表達的是"我的老師可能不會認為我在寫這封英文信算是一種英文寫作的練習", 那麼你可以寫成「He might not think I am practicing English writing.」會比較看得懂你的意思。

  • lobo
    Lv 5
    9 年前

    Would you please write your autograph on the photo?

    sign your autograph

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