請問有英文高手幫小弟翻譯嗎?

Question

因為要寫英文歌詞

但小弟我英文非常的爛

所以我先寫成中文

希望有高手可幫翻譯成英文,最好像英文詩

當我展張雙翼時,我會感到眾天使在哭泣
當我俯看大地時,我將會看到人類的自私

所以墮天使得志,因為我們心存邪惡
所以天使墮落了,因為我們忘記正義

貪婪,欲望,名利,罪惡,邪淫 不要忘記在你心中那微薄的正義

以Forseti之名告訴世人真理
讓我們學會如何謙虛
不要讓天使們遺棄我們
正義感必需在你們心裡長存

Nicole · Accepted Answer

因為要像英詩所以幫你搞了押韻，
（現在念上去三段也能分別押韻）
文法上也參照了古典一點的寫法。
（如七宗罪的lust等，還有歌劇常用的triumpt等）
百份百人手翻譯，絕無使用翻譯機。

當我展張雙翼時,我會感到眾天使在哭泣
When I unfold my wings, angels are mourning sad
當我俯看大地時,我將會看到人類的自私
When I look to the earth, selfishness of mankind would be the fatal dread

所以墮天使得志,因為我們心存邪惡
Fallen angels triumph as evil grows
所以天使墮落了,因為我們忘記正義
Angels were then fallen as justice was lost in our souls

貪婪,欲望,名利,罪惡,邪淫 不要忘記在你心中那微薄的正義
Greed, desire, pride, sinful deeds and lust, Not to let the frail sense of righteousness fade

以Forseti之名告訴世人真理
In Forseti's name the truth would be revealed to the mortals
讓我們學會如何謙虛
May we learn to be humble
不要讓天使們遺棄我們
May us not to be forsaken by the angels
正義感必需在你們心裡長存
Within our hearts justice shall be immortal

阿昌 · Answer

When I exhibition Zhang wings, I feel the angels cry
When I overlooking the earth, I will see the selfishness of the human

Fallen angels unsuccessful, because we feel the evil
The Angel, because we forget justice

Greed, lust, fame and fortune, crime, sexual misconduct do not forget that meager justice in your heart

Forseti the name tells the world the truth
Let us learn how to humble
Do not let the angels abandon us
Sense of justice necessary in your heart forever

河小豚 · Answer

When the wings when I show, I feel the angels cryWhen I leaned over the Earth, and I will see human selfishnessFallen angels have a successful career, because we feel the evilAngels fall, because we forget justiceGreed, lust, fame, crime, prostitution do not forget that in your heart a small justiceIn the name of Forseti to tell the world the truthLet us learn how to modestyDo not let the Angel left usJustice required in your heart forever

NIHON · Answer

I get wings to fly, I feel that angels's crying
When I look down on earth, I'll see the selfish of human
Lost angels are happy because we become evil
Angels falls , because we have forgotton justice

亭妘 · Answer

When I unfold opens the biplane wing, I will feel the numerous angels, in sob when I bend down looks at the earth, I will see humanity's selfish Therefore drops the angel to be successful, because we have evilly, therefore the angel degenerated, because we forget the justice Greedy, the desire, the fame and fortune, the evil, evil obscene do not need to forget in your heart that meager justice Tell the common people name of how by does the Forseti the truth to let us learn not to modestly let the angels abandon our sense of justice to in you exist forever at heart

請問有英文高手幫小弟翻譯嗎?

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